User talk:Erinebusby/sandbox

Hi Erin!

I've just read your sandbox material, and you're adding some excellent sources to the article you're working on. My biggest suggestions as you continue to work on this article are: --Adding text. This is the single biggest thing. Use the sources you have found to add to this article. --your final citations for Wikipedia will look a little different than the ones you currently have in your sandbox (although these have all the pieces of information you will end up needing, so you at least won't have to go back and find different information about the articles)

Without seeing a draft of new text in here yet, I'm not able to give more specific feedback. Once you have some of your changes/additions drafted, though, I would be happy to look at this again! Nicoleccc (talk) 21:10, 29 July 2018 (UTC)