User talk:Erinford44/Job strain/Tmbloyed Peer Review

I am guessing that your top paragraph is your lead? if so it looks pretty good. you give a good summary for what is within your article. The sections you have come up with are relevant so that's good. Some of the sections still need some information, that I'm sure you are still working on. The ones that do have information such as: Low salaries Excessive workloads Few opportunities for growth or advancement Work that isn’t engaging or challenging Lack of social support Not having enough control over job-related decisions Conflicting demands or unclear performance expectations

I think you should expand on these more and explain them. For example, why do low salaries create stress? why do excessive workloads create stress? I think this will help add more to the body of the article.

you have done a great job so far staying neutral with your words, keep that up. your sources are good but I would suggest finding more than one source for each of your sections.