User talk:Erinjones

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Speedy deletion nomination of Orthopaedic and spine center of the rockies


A tag has been placed on Orthopaedic and spine center of the rockies, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Business for more information.

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Hi, you can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~. I've seen your message, but I'm pretty busy in real life for the next 48 hours, I'll reply in detail as soon as I can. I think the problems are soluble, but need a bit of work.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  19:34, 30 November 2011 (UTC)

OK, the problems are as follows
 * It did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts or show that it meets the notability guidelines.
 * It's much too promotional in tone. Examples
 * Direct links in the text to your websites. There shouldn't be any url links in the text. You can have the links in the references, and one "Official website" link in an "External links" section
 * It's all about the physicians and what you offer, why do we need to know the physician's backgrounds?
 * It was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. spammy language unsupported by in-line references include offers a wide range... served... helped pioneer... led the development... enhancement of medical care... pioneered and supported... Of special note. All of these are unsupported opinions presented as fact.
 * You shouldn't have contact details such as addresses. If people want to find you they can use your website.

 Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:21, 2 December 2011 (UTC)