User talk:ErisHana/sandbox

There's a lot to cover here! Think practically with this one. Start first with essentials - Names of clinics and Hospitals, Locations, Short history (founded when), public or private. Provide pictures and geolocation - link to relevant places. Use this as your foundation for developing contextual information about the healthcare system in Kosovo and how it operates. PRose DC (talk) 09:13, 26 February 2014 (UTC)


 * You have done some good research. Keep up the good work. --Λeternus (talk) 23:06, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

KTC's comment
An article should start with a short introduction (without an associated section heading), telling readers unfamiliar with the subject a tiny little bit about what the article subject is about. The content in the Statistics section should be worked into different relevant sections on what the statistics is actually telling people. So for example, the statistics on mortality rate will go into a mortality rate section.

There's entire section without wikilinks, which may be appropriate. Have a double check that there's no terms in there that should be linked. External links should not normally be used in the body of an article. So, we're not trying to advertise the different Health Insurance Company here, just list who they are without the external links to their website. See also section are for internal wikilinks to other Wikipedia articles. External links go into a separate External links section.

Good job, looking forward to seeing the final article. -- KTC (talk) 08:37, 1 March 2014 (UTC)