User talk:Eryk (Wiki Ed)/sandbox//Environmental science

Feedback
Hi, Thanks for this draft, and your invitation to comment. Great initiative! Here's some feedback, as I read through the draft document:


 * "This doc is intended to be read ONLY by students in Environmental Studies/Conservation courses."


 * -- Please note that, while subtle, there's an imporant difference between the environmental sciences and environmental studies.


 * "What's Notable? Remember that not every group doing good work on an environmental issue is notable enough for Wikipedia. Don’t rely on an organization’s own website. Instead, rely upon what others have said about your topic."


 * -- Here you might add a link to the later section later on reliable sources.


 * "Best source: Current books, textbooks, or other materials from reliable publishers, written by peer-reviewed experts in environmental science. Consider this the gold standard!"


 * -- Here you might add something about "peer-reviewed articles in scientific journals".
 * -- Also, in the environmental sciences, reliable sources often come from a variety of disciplinary and interdisciplinary sources -- not just environmental science or environmental studies.

Hope this is useful. Kind regards, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 19:54, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I've incorporated some feedback and will make other adjustments in the design of the doc. Very helpful! --Eryk (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:30, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Further suggestions
Hi, Coming along nicely! Here are a few additional suggestions:


 * For: "By documenting and sharing your knowledge about environmental science, you’ll help Wikipedia..."


 * ... you might substitute ...


 * "By documenting and sharing your knowledge about one or more of the environmental sciences, you’ll help Wikipedia..."


 * There's fairly strong consensus these days, I think, that there are multiple environmental sciences.


 * For: "Choose topics with plentiful and interesting literature in peer-reviewed journals or books, but not..."


 * ... you might substitute ...


 * "Choose topics with plentiful and interesting literature in peer-reviewed journals, other science periodicals, or books, but not..."


 * This would more clearly include publications such as Scientific American.


 * For: "written by experts in environmental science."


 * ... you might substitute ...


 * "written by experts in one or more of the environmental sciences."


 * As per above.

Kind regards, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 01:38, 5 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks, ! Incorporated all of your feedback. Would you like to be credited on this handbook? If so, please send me an e-mail at eryk@wikiedu.org. --Eryk (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:41, 5 May 2016 (UTC)


 * You're welcome, . The page is looking good. If you would otherwise include an Acknowledgements note then you are welcome to mention me in that note. No need to single me out, though, if I'm the only one. Glad to assist. Kind regards, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 18:19, 5 May 2016 (UTC)
 * You'd be on the list with a few Environmental Sciences instructors, so please shoot me an e-mail by May 10 with how you'd like to be credited! Otherwise I'll go with your Wikipedia username. --Eryk (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:58, 5 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . Using my Wikipedia username is fine, as it links readily to further information, if anyone is interested. Kind regards, DA Sonnenfeld (talk) 19:22, 5 May 2016 (UTC)