User talk:Escrivendi

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Emmanuel Séjourné (October 6)
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Emmanuel Séjourné note on my Talk page
Hi Escrivendi and thanks for your note on my talk page. My primary concern was the absence of references and I think you should focus first on this. I understand your point that the statements made about the music were not subjective, however you don't provide evidence of this with a reputable source. If you were, for instance, to say, 'According to the music critic Joe Bloggs, Séjourné's music is: "rhythmic, romantic, and energetic", (supplying a reference for this that could then be verified) then I would be more comfortable that this was suitable for inclusion. Without knowing where that description had come from, I assumed it was a personal judgement. Remember that Wikipedia is not a publisher of original thought. Even if you know that something is true, it must be supported – ie, it must already have been published in a reliable source. With that in mind, you might also want to revisit other statements and check that you provide evidence – including the description of him under Education as: "a brilliant student" and under Career: "one of the world’s most famous mallet percussionists". I do hope that is clearer and helps with revisions. I note that two of the references that didn't seem to link out properly previously do work now. Many thanks. Libby norman (talk) 18:15, 27 October 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Emmanuel Séjourné (December 13)
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Emmanuel Séjourné
Hello Escrivendi. I have accepted your draft and moved it into article space at Emmanuel Séjourné where you can continue to improve it. Thank you for helping increase Wikipedia's coverage in this area. Best wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 13:32, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your time and your help, Voceditenore! Wish you a nice day, --Escrivendi (talk) 14:33, 24 March 2014 (UTC)