User talk:Esme Jones/sandbox

Hi, I have some feedback for this section in your sandbox:
 * Per Wikipedia policies for internal consistency, section titles should be in Sentence case, not Title Case. So instead of "Later Life and Death", it should be Later life and death.
 * Nineteenth Amendment is a proper noun and should be capitalized
 * Shouldn't be an ellipses here The practice of spiritualism was part of the work of suffragettes...Within
 * I worry this sentence gives her too much credit: her participation in the women's movement saw it transformed from a fringe group to the respectable lobby that succeeded in 1920. It makes it sound like she was single-handedly responsible for the passage of the Nineteenth.

Let me know if you have any questions! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:17, 19 July 2019 (UTC)