User talk:Esmearielfemsub/sandbox

Hey Esmerielfemsub! It's Threedeezeens from Feminist Art and Subculture. Here are some suggestions to help improve the tattoo wiki page:

To add:

-a paragraph/section on the various associations tattoos have depending on their location on the body, relationship to the body who owns it, content/style of the tattoo itself

- The "social skin" that engages the public, Tattoos are likened to keeping a journal/diary/blog, women are expected to adhere to the beauty ideal & tattoos, especially big ones defy that, unlike plastic surgery which is less visible, tattoos deny the invisibility of women as they age (I want to be covered” Heavily tattooed women challenge the dominant beauty culture)

-Janis Joplin’s wrist tattoo was one of the 1st publicly visible tattoos on a woman. Women mostly started out with small “feminine” tattoos. They had to be “small, cute, hidden”. Some women add tattoos to their bodies to enhance their confidence (I want to be covered” Heavily tattooed women challenge the dominant beauty culture)

-https://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1021330609522

Can't wait to see the end result, happy editing! Threedeezeens (talk) 17:17, 17 April 2018 (UTC)threedeezeens

Hey threedeezeens,

Thanks for your suggestions. I am actually focused on editing the Radical Cheerleading page: the edits to the tattoo page were actually for the in-class activity we did to practice wiki editing.

I appreciate the comments, though, and happy editing to you too! Esmearielfemsub (talk) 22:15, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Esme 4/19

Response to Threedeezeens Peer Review
Hey threedeezeens,

Thanks for your suggestions. I am actually focused on editing the Radical Cheerleading page: the edits to the tattoo page were actually for the in-class activity we did to practice wiki editing.

I appreciate the comments, though, and happy editing to you too! Esmearielfemsub (talk) 22:15, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Esme 4/19 Esmearielfemsub (talk) 18:04, 24 April 2018 (UTC) esme