User talk:Esmet2/sandbox

Peer Review for Article Edits
The article edits for the article Student athlete are great. The edits Esmet2 make the article easier to read and understand. By adding more useful information and useful words. When there was unless and unmeaninful words the user took out the words and made the sentence more useful. I liked when Esemt2 took out one quote and added another one that differed from the first to the article. The new quote that she added to the article was more informational and easier to read. Overall the edits were great and don't need to be fixed.