User talk:Esotericorangepeel/Cephalotheca foveolata/JasonZekunHuang Peer Review

This is a peer review for the species Cephalotheca foveolata by User:Esotericorangepeel

This outline arranged in the chronological order of cited reference papers. Provides very specific details on the morphology, physiology, habitat and growing condition of the species. The history of identification and taxonomic characteristics is somewhat lacking. Although dense in information, it is recommended that the user rearrange the outline in the order listed on Week 3 Outline (On how to write the article outline) where in the reviewers opinion, a history/morphology/physiology/habitat organization provides the reviewer a much clearer view of the flow and coherency of the final article. The outline in this present state, although abundant in information, is lacking the explicit coherency and flow - which is the main goal of an outline - of an article outline. With regards to references, the user lists 6 sources, which is rather sufficient at this stage, but since the references all come from Journal sources, some additional book resources are recommended to compliment the Journals. Overall the outline is rich in information and really provides the detail on each aspect of the species, but lacks in the proper organization and layout that matter so crucially in an article outline. JasonZekunHuang (talk) 18:30, 29 October 2019 (UTC)