User talk:Esreekay/sandbox

I've reassigned my article to Ai Weiwei.

The 'Visual arts' section seems to need the most attention. I've pasted that section in my sandbox and have my proposed edit below it. I moved the information paragraph to the top of the section, traded the bullet list to section headings for each piece, added brief descriptions, and added some images with captions for the page.

Esreekay (talk) 22:07, 23 April 2017 (UTC)

I'd like to develop this article: Bradley Steyn. It has been flagged for deletion because of questions of notability (because it is so far only linked to one event), and because of its lack of encyclopedic style. Furthermore, Bradley is a personal friend (I call him 'Springy') and it requires a more objective editor. Bradley's experience and influence does not begin and end with the massacre perpetrated by Barend Strydom, he is releasing a book published by Jacana Media entitled Undercover with Mandela's Spies: The Story of the Boy Who Crossed the Square chronicling his experience beginning with Barend Strydom's Wit Wolfe Massacre through his involvement and service to South Africa's Apartheid police security forces as well as Nelson Mandela's Umkhonto we Sizwe, under the command of Jeremy Vearey.

Bradley is making an effort to leverage his experience to heal the deep remaining scars of Apartheid in South Africa. Until now, the black victims of this massacre and other instances like it have gone largely unremembered by South Africa and the world, while white perpetrators like Barend Strydom as well as white victims of political violence are commemorated to posterity.

please offer any guidance on this sandbox draft before it is incorporated into the main article

following are url links to further press coverage [] [] [] [] Esreekay (talk) 04:12, 30 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Answers / Discussion should be at Talk:Bradley_Steyn, the comment copy above should probably be deleted. Feel free to delete my comment too while doing so. Thanks and good luck! ~ ToBeFree (talk) 05:02, 30 January 2019 (UTC)