User talk:Estan3840j

Speedy deletion nomination of National Football League Referees Association
Hello Estan3840j,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged National Football League Referees Association for deletion, because it seems to be a test. Did you know that the Wikipedia Sandbox is available for testing out edits?

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks, Berton (talk) 17:12, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review
Interesting! Good job!! It will be nice when it's finished.

KaylaENG3840J (talk) 16:26, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

ERIN SAMMON's Peer Review: I think there is a lot of great information within your article. Make sure that you add citations, especially when inserting quotes. In "The Early Years" section, there are a few grammatical errors that I'm sure you will notice once you re-read it. Make sure that you spell DOLAN consistently throughout your article, sometimes it is spelled DOLIN instead. Make sure that when you are listing the five original owners you try to find where Len Lexenburg is from as well to make that sentence flow a little better (also make sure you clarify the owners are all from the cleveland area, some people may not recognize the city names).

Once it's done I think it will be a great article. Sounds like a place I wish I could go see a concert at :)

Es3840j (talk) 16:40, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Kent Engel Peer Review: Good start to the article, everything seemed to conform to the manual of style so far. One thing that I found was the name Dolan was spelled incorrectly once in the article. All of the links seem to take me to the right place and add credibility to your article. Just make sure you site sources and proofread and you should be good! KE3840J (talk) 16:48, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

I like your different section headings, but there are a few grammatical errors. There should be a comma after Dolan in the introduction paragraph. Perhaps you could add a picture of the theatre. In the early years section after "$3 million" the with of "with Dolan" should be lower case. I can see you are not done writing or editing your topic. Make sure that you include internal citations!

Scherma3840J (talk) 16:59, 1 November 2012 (UTC)