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Proposed edits to Wikipedia's The Chrysanthemum article for Your Class
The current article (June, 2015) has little more than an introduction, so it is in need of a few things. The following categories could all be added:

1.Summary

2.Characters

3.Setting

Original
Elisa Allen - Protagonist Henry Allen - Elisa's Husband Men - Meeting with Henry Allen Scotty - Ranch Hand Traveling Salesman - Antagonist

Revised

 * Elisa Allen- The Protagonist of the story, that spends most of her time with her flowers in the gardens. Does lots of garden work which makes her look very manly.
 * Henry Allen- He is the husband of Elisa and is a great business man, he also does not give Elisa attention.
 * Men- They were talking to Henry in the beginning of the novel.
 * Scotty- Ranch Hand
 * Tinker Traveling Salesman- Gave Elisa attention but really was just interested in the flower pot.

Original Contribution
Elisa Allen- Henry Allen- Men- Scotty- Traveling Salesman (Tinker)-
 * The Protagonist of the novel
 * labelled as very masculine. Elisa's condition at the farm contributes with the way she presents herself as "block and heavy".
 * Husband of Elisa, is very consumed in his own work and does not see the importance of Elisa's flowers. He is a very successful businessman.
 * These men were having a chat with Henry Allen.
 * Ranch Hand
 * The antagonist in the novel who speaks to Elisa and acts like he is interested in her chrysanthemum but instead he wants the pot that the chrysanthemum are planted in.