User talk:Etaylor6sfsu/sandbox

These four pages look pretty good. I could see developing Day of the Triffids a bit more. Next step: look at the pages and think about what specifically needs work. Then, develop a plan. ProfHanley (talk) 17:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

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This looks like a good plan. ProfHanley (talk) 16:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

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Okay. I think the plot summary may be a little too long. And, you've got to cite your sources in the article/revision. Outside of the beefed up plot summary, are there other areas where you can improve the original article? ProfHanley (talk) 15:30, 8 April 2021 (UTC)

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The article itself sort of already covers the bases, if only in a very vague and minimal way. I can definitely shorten the plot summary to include mainly the pivotal points from the film, but I focused more on the plot due to that being what was lacking the most. I'll cite my sources once I pare down the plot for sure, and I think the only other aspect of the article I can accurately improve is the pictures which I'll keep searching for since the page is completely bare. Thanks for the feedback! Etaylor6sfsu (talk) 17:42, 10 April 2021 (UTC)