User talk:Etc cyt/sandbox

What does the article (or section) do well? Well explained introductions for Asian American resource centers. Pictures were good too.

What changes would you suggest overall? On History section where you talk about Asian immigration to the United States, putting thesis on the first sentence might help audience to understand better. I understood the reason for that section by reading the last sentence, so maybe explaining things at first line would help audience.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Making the paragraph more connected with the subtopic. Maybe, little more content is needed.