User talk:Ethan343

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Mmacmillan1's Peer Review for Bog Iron
I am reviewing the Iron Production section that you plan on adding to the Iron Bog article.

The lead is well done and is an interesting read. The content is well written and is neutral, which is very good. Excellent job using multiple sources. The information was from reliable sources which includes peer-reviewed journal articles. I would suggest adding on to the history of Bog Iron in North America, Europe, and other regions around the world. I would also suggest expanding on what bog iron is, how long does it naturally take to be made and the effects (if any) that it has on the surrounding environment, etc.

This section will be a great addition to the Bog Iron article. The content that you have so far is a great start.

Mmacmillan1 (talk) 16:28, 1 March 2019 (UTC)