User talk:EthanIAm16/Oswald Avery/Srlg36 Peer Review

Addressing peer review
The reason why the "Retirement and later years" and "DNA as a basis for genes" are not in chronological order are because the "DNA as a basis for genes" goes into detail on a specific experiment. I think I could make it more clear by briefly mentioning the DNA experiment in his life section where it would belong chronologically and then leave the "DNA as a basis for genes" section with more in depth details as a separate section after. Lil&#39; Runner 2.0 (talk) 02:04, 24 March 2023 (UTC)