User talk:EthicsForAFreeWorld/sandbox

Good job
I think you have a good edit. The structure is clear/ you made it clear exactly where this new information is going. I think you did a really good job of adding more information while using a neutral tone. I think that is the hardest part and your edit sounds really neutral so good job!! My only suggestion would be to include a sentence explaining how it is easier to spread more information on Facebook. Overall, good job!! -CasperCasey

Excellent
I think this will be a valuable edit! You have clear intent on where this edit needs to be placed. You also know how it needs to be approached. I think your tone of neutrality is quite excellent. It does not even seem you need to argue, because the sources you have chosen speak for the information. If I might be able to suggest, please dive a little deeper into why propaganda on social media(such as Facebook) can spread more easily...I am excited to see where this edit leads and if it inspires more editing to come! -Dcaxew --Dcaxew (talk) 05:48, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Nice work
Glad we talked about the final version. I know you got the notes.--Jbdolphin (talk) 20:00, 26 April 2021 (UTC)