User talk:Ethologyisfun31/Supernormal Stimulus

Peer-review of Supernomal Stimulus article: Good inclusion of the famous research by Niko Tinbergen on Herring Gull chicks. This section should be further developed so readers might find the summary of this study and the conclusions that arose from it. Keep your sentences short and concise. Convey only one idea per sentence and only keep necessary words in your sentences (avoid flowery language). The section on brood parasitism is interesting and should be developed further to describe how the parasite chicks can trick the parents with "irresistible" begging. The causation section should include some mechanistic explanations to provide information about why supernormal stimuli exist and are maintained. Many sentences have grammatical and spelling errors, make sure you review your article thoroughly before submission.