User talk:Eudoraniu/sandbox

Peer Review by Olivia Leadbetter

I think that this page is really well done! Considering that the page was a stub to begin with I am impressed by how much you added to it. One suggestion I have would be to add in quick links for things like the "2009 Yongsan Tragedy" the various film festivals, and anything else that has a wiki page of its own. This way, as viewers read the article they can quickly jump those wiki pages at a single click if they want to.

Also, I would add a section to the table of contents for references and external links.

Is there a heading that can go with that first paragraph (starting with "the evictees...")? It seems sort of out of place because it is not an introduction.

Other than that, it looks good!

Thank you for the comments and suggestions! I think the suggestions are all very helpful but it's hard to find external resources in english related to Yongsan Tragedy, which is why I do not have a section on external links. I would make the change on linking external links to existing content!