User talk:Eunacorn/sandbox

Peer Review
Overall your edits are structured and relatable to your topic. Looking at the lead I do feel satisfied that it relates to the importance of your topic. Your topic is already organized, but I would suggest to make a heading for influencers, impact, or somewhere along those lines to place Emile Durkheim and Peter Kroptkin together in one section, while keeping them chronologically in order. It seems that your edits mainly focus on the lead, which I think is very important to edit since it is the opening. A section to may consider adding would be "Ethics" I think that could help enhance the subject.

Peer Review Response
Thank you for your feedback! Looking through the article again I do notice that the information is a little out dated. I will try to find more articles and information that is a little more recent. I also considered in adding maybe example cases that are significant. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cajjen12 (talk • contribs) 04:37, 12 April 2019 (UTC)