User talk:Eungar16

May 2012
Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute to the encyclopedia, but when you add or change content, as you did to the article New Square, New York, please cite a reliable source for your addition. This helps maintain our policy of verifiability. See Citing sources for how to cite sources, and the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Gtwfan52 (talk) 20:25, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for your recent contributions to New Square, New York. Unfortunately they have been reverted. Information such as the current mayor does not belong in the lead paragraph. It may be more appropriate in the history section. Also please note that words like "renowned" and "amazing" really have no place in an encyclopedia article. Wikipedia articles are for the dissemination of verifiable factual information. No matter what a person's accomplishments might be, referring to him as "amazing" will never be anything more than the author's opinion. Additionally, there is an error in your citation formatting. I really can't tell what it is, but it just doesn't show up. If you drop me a note on my talk page when you post your rewrite, I will look at it and try to fix it for you. Good luck, and please don't get discouraged. Gtwfan52 (talk) 22:55, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Actually, I just noticed the article has a "Government" section. That would be the appropriate place of a discussion of the current mayor.  Gtwfan52 (talk) 23:00, 14 May 2012 (UTC)