User talk:Eungjeonglee

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Hello, Eungjeonglee, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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I took a look at User:Eungjeonglee/VR Systems. It looks like you're off to a good start, but here are some things you could improve
 * Every statement needs to be connected to a supporting source. That means that there shouldn't be any text the final reference in a paragraph.
 * You need more secondary sources. The company's own sources aren't independent - they obviously have a vested interest in talking up their own products. So to the extent that's possible, try finding sources that are written by independent, third party sources. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:46, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your constructive and detailed feedback! I will edit the references and research on more secondary sources. Eungjeonglee (talk) 21:47, 2 November 2021 (UTC)Eungjeonglee

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