User talk:Eva Sjerps

Eva, thanks for adding material to the Halil Gür article. The photos are great and so is the updated info. However, the opening sentence no longer sounds encyclopedic, and I am not sure why you deleted what was already there - it covered his early years and your data relates to his later years. Should we not put that back, perhaps slightly edited, as the opening paragraph and then continue from there with your material? Also, some of your sentences sound like you are advertising for him - be careful to keep a neutral tone. BTW, if you have a complete list of his publications, that would be great as a section at the bottom of the article somewhere. --Doric Loon (talk) 20:02, 20 May 2014 (UTC)