User talk:EvyRue512/sandbox

I would like to add more headings/titles, to more clearly identify and organize the article "Body Mind." I also plan on searching for more reliable resources and citations to backup the information in this article. The language of the article and overall depth of information could be added upon and improved upon as well. Overall, the article itself is quite vague, and it is not very neutral in its view. To solve this, I plan on adding facts on the history of Body Mind, the pros of how Body Mind is viewed and seen today, and how it may be false in other viewpoints. EvyRue512 (talk) 21:23, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

I also plan on trying to find and add some images for further clarification of the information, as well as adding to the overall look and visual appeal of the article.EvyRue512 (talk) 21:42, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

For the article "Critical Thinking," I am planning on improving the overall quality and flow of the language and word description used in the article. There are also some sources that need verified or added to the article to help improve its overall quality of the article. Finally, I might edit or revise the order and names of some of the paragraph headings, so that they are in a more organized and clear manner for the reader. EvyRue512 (talk) 21:49, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

Conflict Resolution
I added a couple of citations in sections where it sad that there were no sources cited. I made sure that the citations were relevant to the information being covered within the article and appropriate for that section. While the information was clear, concise, and to the point, there was not much else added that would further enhance or amplify the article and the information it was presenting. Overall, the article was easy to follow and understand, as there were many headings that helped organize and guide the reader as to what was being covered. However, when it came to the citations and references, there seems to be a bit of work that needs to be done. There were a few sections in which there were no citations, so some will need to be added. Also, while the references listed at the end of the article pertained to the information and topics being covered within the article, many if not all of them were not recent. The most recent one I could find was published in 2009. As such, I think this article is organized and informative, but there are places in which more could be added to enhance the overall length, depth, and quality of the information and topics within the article, "Conflict Resolution." EvyRue512 (talk) 05:34, 21 January 2021 (UTC)EvyRue512