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Ally Higgins's Peer Review
A very in-depth look at Mock Spanish, I definitely learned a lot from reading this page. I only have a few revisions. First, I thinking a discussion about the similarities and difference between Mock Spanish and "Span-glish" would be an interesting addition. Also, a possible synthesis of the study done about Anglo-American managers and Spanish-speaking works would have helped me have a better understand of that section. Furthermore, I checked all the links and they work!

Notes on the article "Mock Spanish"
I think we should stay away from making blanket statements like "many people" or "many anthropologists" I think it we can phrase it more specifically or cite specific anthropologists. --Emily White 02/26/19

Laura Toner's Peer Review
I think it is a very good article, but I would appreciate it being formatted with headings rather than a bold font. Breaking up the text would make it less intimidating to the reader. Lauratoner01 (talk) 22:37, 27 February 2019 (UTC)