User talk:Ewizard123/Hunger in Bangladesh

After looking over your article, it looks really solid. All of your sources check out, and the article maintains the unbiased tone that is important for any article. I feel that the History section you've created could use some rewording, it just feels a little vague on the details. Maybe you could go into more detail as to why the war lead to food shortage. Was it because Bangladeshi farmland was destroyed during the war? Was it because the newly formed government was unable to effectively direct/regulate farming? Were there any unfavorable growing conditions like droughts or other land mismanagement? I feel that expanding on this (even just briefly) would improve the specificity of the paragraph, even if it's not the topic of you article. The second paragraph was great, though, and I believe it doesn't need any changes. Kackem (talk) 20:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Overall, your work looks great! My main suggestion is similar to the one above. I think finding some specific examples for the "History" section would boost the quality of your addition to the article, because in my personal opinion, without specific examples, the tone of the paragraph seems slightly biased. Again as said above, I think even just one brief example would be great to add to your contribution, such as one specific example of the type of damage caused by the war. Other than that, your sources and "Locational Data" paragraph look great. Jillianb06 (talk) 01:22, 3 December 2020 (UTC)