User talk:Ewk'sik'nii13/sandbox

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MY SAND BOX GOAL: My goal is to realign the AIM page with historical facts - especially with regards to sovereignty, political status, and of course, the violations of the Fort Laramie Treaty by the U.S. (Fact). Will include John Trudell. Will seek Womxn who were involved in A.I.M. and their roles.

BIA took Indians from other reservations and placed them in charge of other tribes - such as Klamath - intermarriage with non-home Tribe members gave Indians who worked with BIA to work with a different reservation. Some Tribal members of terminated tribes were given the option during this time to enroll with different tribes effectively working dilute blood quantum, thus working to eliminate Indian status.

FOUND: An AIM Woman who fought the forced sterilizations of Indian women during the 1970s. This article could use mention of ICWA and the forced sterilizations.

Wounded Knee 1973

Fort Laramie Treaty: Lakota The Treaty of Fort Laramie was eventually ignored and the Black Hills illegitimately subsumed by the United States government.

to uphold Native American Treaty rights, address unemployment, poverty as well as to address issues that Tribal groups as a whole face with regards to settler colonialism.

AIM's leaders spoke out against high unemployment, slum housing, and racist treatment, fought for treaty rights and the reclamation of tribal land, and advocated on behalf of urban Indians whose situation bred illness and poverty. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ewk'sik'nii13 (talk • contribs) 21:42, 2 June 2019 (UTC)

PEER REVIEWS: — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ewk'sik'nii13 (talk • contribs) 21:14, 2 June 2019 (UTC)

Hello fellow classmate. I really like your article and its beginning process. There isn't much I can critique because I am still trying to learn this program. I believe it is important to share the history of the native people there was just so much wrong done to the Native American population. I will get back to you soon with some peer review ideas on your topic.(MarcosXavier78 (talk) 17:14, 12 May 2019 (UTC))

Hello Jolene, wow you got your work cut out for you there is so much information about your article. I didn't realize about all the different areas around the world that had to partake in the colonialism of land. As far as my peer review is concerned I think everything you are doing to enhance the topic is great. I really don't know if you could do this but would there be a way to consolidate the material? that would be my only thought about the topic. anyhow keep up the great work!(MarcosXavier78 (talk) 08:47, 18 May 2019 (UTC))

(MarcosXavier78 I appreciate your feedback, because yes, this article is a hard read and there is a lot to unpack, as well as a lot that has been marginalized from discourse. I am redoing your peer review because I found the instructions on how to do it and will be happy to do so - I like the topic you picked. It is a good one and will talk to you more soon after I review the article, it's a long one too.

Peer Review
Hello! I am super impressed and intrigued by your work thus far. I'm not sure how in depth you are looking to go into the complexities of Native vs federal vs state jurisdiction, but there is definitely a lot that can be said there! A book I have read that discusses Public Law 280 and VAWA extensively, as well as the gray areas in jurisdiction and the ways in which that contributes to systemic issues facing Native Americans, is The Beginning and End of Rape by Sarah Deer. This article also expands on the ways in which the jurisdictional gaps allow for non-Native people to perpetrate crimes on Native land with total impunity (https://www.hcn.org/articles/tribal-affairs-what-the-violence-against-women-act-could-do-in-indian-country-and-one-major-flaw). One more book that might act as supplementary, but is a work of fiction, is The Round House by Louise Erdrich. It's a story that demonstrates really well the complexities of crime (especially against womxn) and prosecution within Native communities. I will leave it at that, but I look forward to seeing what else you do!Hannah-ortloff (talk) 21:47, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Hi Hannah-ortloff - I appreciate your feedback/fortunately have those books and yes, there is much to hash out regarding the jurisdictional multiplicity in federal Indian law/intersections with settler-law. PL280 has had devastating effects that have been marginalized from historical narratives/discourse