User talk:Exoticgiraffe/sandbox

Hello Rachel! I'm attempting to comment on your talk page and will see if I'm successful. Tic Tag Tow (talk) 13:31, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Rachel, I think you have a great start to your editing process. I think it would be beneficial to add some history behind the bisexual erasure, there is a lot of information as to why people do not support bisexuality or why they do not think it is a real sexual orientation. I would also recommend going into further detail on your section about school, I think that is an interesting fact and would love to hear more about it and the LGBTQ education in school. Fletchal (talk) 07:54, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Alijah Fletcher


 * Peer Review:

Hey Rachel, What an interesting topic! I think you're off to a good start. I think it'd be helpful to add more pop culture references. In addition, do you think adding some insight to in which ways school are teaching hetero/homosexulaity but not bisexulaity or pansexuality would be helpful? Sedersta (talk) 17:48, 19 November 2019 (UTC)