User talk:Eyesofbabylon/Jeff Key

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Please let me know what I can do to make this page acceptable as a Wikipedia entry! Thank you for your assistance!Eyesofbabylon (talk) 17:48, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The article, as written, is blatantly promotional. It needs to be rewritten in a neutral, encyclopedic tone. The in-text external links need to be replaced with inline citations. Due to your strong conflict of interest, it may be necessary for you to wait for another editor to do this, rather than attempting to do it yourself as it is very difficult to write neutrally about subjects with which we are personally involved. Thanks! VQuakr (talk) 18:40, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

User name change request
I need to know how to change my user name--I went to the page that seems to be the page on which to request this change, but couldn't figure out how to list myself--there was no edit option. If I clicked "Change" then I was only changing a request made by someone else--I did not see how to list my request. Also, I made a Wikipedia entry for the first time ever yesterday, and on the page it says there are multiple issues that I don't know how/what to correct. Can someone help me figure out what I need to do? Thank you so much for your help!!Eyesofbabylon (talk) 18:29, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I posted the link to the simple name change request page at your user talk page. VQuakr (talk) 18:37, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

I need specific guidance on what I need to change to resolve the issues on this entry--this is my first entry and I am unable to ascertain what exactly needs to be altered from the general categories that I've been provided. I have submitted it to Wikipedia editors for review, but I also read that it might take a long time to get feedback. Can I get someone's very specific feedback so that I can correct this entry asap? Thanks so, so much for your assistance!
 * This is not an appropriate use of the help me template. All you can do is sit back and wait on Editor Review to review the article.  You might consider joining #wikipedia or #wikipedia-en on the Freenode IRC network and seeing if someone in there would be willing to help.   AndrewN  talk 04:58, 16 May 2011 (UTC)