User talk:Eylul.horozoglu/Ocoee salamander

Peer review
Overall, this entry provided a decent amount of information about the general ecology of Ocoee salamander. Every section in the content has enough information of the topic. I really like all the subheadings the author added. This helps to keep the content organized and helps the readers to follow. The major problem is the leading section. It only talks about the phylogeny and habitat, while most of the information in the content is not summarized in the leading section. Another problem is the territoriality and diet section. This section only has a few sentences, so I recommend the author go through some more articles and add more information on this. Many articles the author cited are in the 1900s, which can be outdated. Thus, it will be better to include more recently published articles if that’s possible.

What I changed:

I added more summary in the leading section to make sure it covers every section discussed in the following content. I also moved a sentence in the habitat section into the diet section because it’s about diet. I also rephrased some sentences to make them more concise. Yunfeng Ge (talk) 20:20, 18 October 2022 (UTC)