User talk:Ezbreezy96/sandbox

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--Jytdog (talk) 19:43, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 * the content is not actually pathophysiology. This should be answering the question -- how does hypothermia harm people? How? What is the mechanism of harm?
 * What are the quotation marks for?
 * you've used UK spellings but the WP article is US English. See WP:ENGVAR. Why is "Shivering" capitalized? We don't use the word "patient" -- see WP:MEDMOS.
 * please fix citations. See WP:MEDHOW
 * for big words that an everyday person might not understand, please consider WP:Wikilinks or writing them in WP:Plain English.

Ezbreezy96 (talk) 02:01, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Great thank you for the suggestions. I will make the appropriate changes.