User talk:Ezia9/sandbox

I love all your content and I think this is something very valuable and worth bringing attention to. I only suggest perhaps including the actual definition of a "transgender woman" as some people have difficulties knowing the difference between a trans man and a trans woman. You can also throw in "hate crime" and some statistics on that. I'm excited to see the final page!

Browan1 (talk) 16:39, 23 November 2020 (UTC)Brooke Rowan Nov.23, 2020

Thank you Brooke! I did so much research for the first three paragraphs that I'm having a bit of writers block for the rest lol. I'll try and get it done tonight. Ezia9 (talk) 20:43, 23 November 2020 (UTC)Elizabeth Zia

Mofadesewa's Review
Hello Elizabeth,

I am really excited to see your final page. I love your topic and love that you are starting your page from scratch. It's inspiring really. Your sentence structures are great and you are citing what needs to be cited. Your headings are also clear and concise. You also write from an unbiased point of view. I would love to see what you come up with for the section on emotional violence.

MAderinsola (talk) 01:35, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your feedback!!Ezia9 (talk) 17:04, 30 November 2020 (UTC)Elizabeth Zia