User talk:F.Balsara

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Can anyone help me improve the article (Mohan Deep) that I have written. My references and citations are perfect, and yet it goes with some question marks.

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F.Balsara (talk) 09:28, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello Titoda, I am returning after a long time, and wish to correct the article about Mohan Deep. You were kind enough to help me the last time but I had to go away due to personal problems. I find myself as ignorant as I was when I began. But I don't understand why three of my references are marked empty. I also need your help in making the piece impersonal or neutral. Will be grateful if you - or anyone else with experience - could help.

Farida F.Balsara (talk) 07:50, 29 June 2015 (UTC) Hello, F.Balsara, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially what you did for User talk:Titodutta. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Tito Dutta (contact) 08:02, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
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