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Week 1 check-in message from Qi
Hello professor, this is Qi, one of students in the MASY 1260-100 course. I am an international student from China, and I have been in United Stated for 5 years. I use Wikipedia a lot, but in fact this is my first time to own a wikipedia account. It is exciting to be a member of this huge group. I have created my own user page Shine821, and you can see my detail introduction on it.Shine821 (talk) 21:37, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia Shine821! What have you learned so far about it? FULBERT (talk) 00:39, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I have learned all the fundamental operations to edit on Wikipedia including posting contents, changing format, and adding links. Besides, I got to know rules to participate in Wikipedia, and always be respect.Shine821 (talk) 16:07, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Excellent! Keep up the great work, Shine821. FULBERT (talk) 01:58, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

check in message from Yushuang Li
Hi Professor, This is Yushuang Li from MASY 1260-100 course. I never know that people can talk in WIKIW. It is so much fun. Hope I can explore more functions in wiki through this extra credit activityYushuangLL (talk) 12:37, 1 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome YushuangLL! Glad you are already learning how open and democratic Wikipedia can be! FULBERT (talk) 12:54, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

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Week 1 Assignment from Wang1663
Hi Professor, I am Zhiwei Wang from MASY 1260-100 course. It is interesting to create a Wikipedia page by myself and participating in this wonderful community. Thanks for giving me this opportunity to learn about it.Wang1663 (talk) 15:53, 1 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this a useful extra and extension to our coursework, Wang1663! ---FULBERT (talk) 15:49, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Check-in from Doris
Hello Professor! This is Doris. I use Wiki everyday but never had my own Wiki account. Thank you for giving us a chance to learn and play around with Wiki. It's very helpful and interesting.Dorisdd (talk) 17:17, 1 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope that your daily use of it will allow you to see and contribute to it in different ways now Dorisdd. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:09, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Check-in from Evelyn
Hi Professor, thank you so much for introducing us to become one of the editors of Wikipedia. I use wiki a lot but never thought I can give some efforts. Though I am not sure if I will post anything in the future, it's exciting to know more about how Wikipedia works.H0187160 (talk) 21:51, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia; glad you are already finding it useful and will learn how you can add to it and improve it, H0187160! --- FULBERT (talk) 16:13, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Christianity in Iran
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week 1 Check-in Message from Yi Sun
Hi Professor, I am Yi Sun from your Research Process and Methodology class. I usually use Wikipedia to search, but this is my first time to use the Wiki Talk. It is interesting to know this function. I can't wait to learn more about wiki. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yisun1 (talk • contribs) 18:58, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome Yisun1 to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign all your Talk page comments with " ~ " to automatically stamp your entries with your username and time/date. Please reply to this comment here and try that. FULBERT (talk) 12:19, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

Is this right?Yisun1 (talk) 15:50, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * This is it. Great Yisun1! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:48, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 1 Assignment from Qianyue
Hi Professor Keefer, I'm Charlene. I am from Research Process & Methodology class section 100. I have done my bachelor degree in University of Miami in Economics and Mathematics. It's my first time to have an account with Wikipedia and I am very glad to study how to edit it. Charlene 1022 (talk) 02:46, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great, Charlene 1022. Welcome to Wikipedia! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:51, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 check- in message from Qi
Hi Professor, I just wrote an article evaluation about Amazon Key in my Sandbox. Please check it and leave any comments.Shine821 (talk) 06:41, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great review of that article. What is your particular area of interest with this, Shine821? --- FULBERT (talk) 20:56, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I am interested in the Internet of Things, which is a network connected with all online-based device for people to remote control. Shine821 (talk) 21:17, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great to hear, Shine821. It will be interested to see how you continue to narrow that as a topic. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:13, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 1 check in from Wei Hao
Hello everyone, I am Wei. Even though I am late, I am really enjoying the training section. It provides me more knowledge about copyright and plagiarism and shows me some basic functions of Wikipedia. I don't even know that so many people and processes behind every article I have ever read. I respect the high moral standard of Wikipedia.Wink1021 (talk) 07:00, 6 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Always better late than never! Welcome Wink1021. Ping me again when you finish Week 1's learning modules via our course Dashboard. Thanks. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:02, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 1 Check in Message from Enzhuang Wang
Hello professor, here is Wang Enzhuang, a student from RPM class. I got my bachelor degree in China and I studied packaging engineering, which focused more on pacakging material and structure design. I just started to use wiki to do research from last year and this is the first time to edit in wiki. — Preceding unsigned comment added by OliverWang (talk • contribs) 19:23, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome OliverWang to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign all your Talk page comments with " ~ " to automatically stamp your entries with your username and time/date. Please reply to this comment here and try that. FULBERT (talk) 12:21, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

OliverWang (talk) 23:04, 7 February 2018 (UTC)thank you professor!
 * You got the right use of the 4~ symbols, but it should be at the end of your comment, and not at the beginning. OK for now OliverWang, though next time please add at the end. FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 7 February 2018 (UTC)

Got it professor! OliverWang (talk) 23:46, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Excellent! FULBERT (talk) 23:47, 7 February 2018 (UTC)

#2 Check-in from Evelyn
Hi professor, I have done the article evaluation on Event Management page and had my suggestions in my sandbox. Please kindly check if there is anything need to be modified. Thank you.H0187160 (talk) 20:56, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks H0187160; I asked you some follow-up questions in your Sandbox on this. Answer there and ping me again here when those are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:50, 4 February 2018 (UTC)
 * professor FULBERT, I have answered your questions in my sandbox, please let me know if there is any further questions. Thank you.H0187160 (talk) 07:55, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great work, H0187160! Fine. FULBERT (talk) 23:52, 7 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 check- in message from Yushuang
Hi professor, this is Yushuang Li,I create an article evaluation in my sandbox, please feel free to give me some advice. Thanks very muchYushuangLL (talk) 00:26, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia, YushuangLL! I hope you find it an exciting learning and contributory experience! --- FULBERT (talk) 00:41, 8 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 1 Assignment from Celine
Hi Professor, I am Celine Zeng from MASY 1260-100 course. I have been touring around Wiki with the badge-winning Wikipedia Adventure. It feels awesome to collect badges plus when you make visible changes in the pages. Can't help to try the skills out!CELINEZ (talk) 16:44, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia, CELINEZ, and thanks for the check-in here. I hope you find this the first step in an amazing world of contributing to general knowledge! FULBERT (talk) 20:24, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for commenting on my check-in. I hope I have finished all required steps so far and please kindly correct me if I have not. CELINEZ (talk) 00:35, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, you are all set for Week 1, CELINEZ. --- FULBERT (talk) 00:45, 8 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 Check-in message from Yi
Hi Professor, I just posted my review of wiki article Food, Inc. Please check it in my sandbox and leave your comments.Yisun1 (talk) 01:13, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great article review. Something so simple that could be done to help improve it! Yisun1. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 8 February 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 2 and Check- in
Hi Professor, I just finished the article evaluation of John Carmack. Please check it in my sandbox and tell me how to improve it.Wang1663 (talk) 03:00, 4 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I will look at this as soon as the first week's work is complete Wang1663; see my comment above requesting more information from your first posting. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:42, 4 February 2018 (UTC)
 * As discussed in class, this is fine. Good clarification Wang1663. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:19, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 1 Assignment from Xiaoya
Hi Professor, I am Xiaoya Zhang from MASY 1260-100 course. I am not sure whether I am doing this right to post a check-in message, just have a try and hope I can understand how to use Wiki this way during such trying.XiaoyaZ (talk) 16:30, 31 January 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by XiaoyaZ (talk • contribs) 03:50, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome XiaoyaZ to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign all your Talk page comments with " ~ " to automatically stamp your entries with your username and time/date. Please reply to this comment here and try that. FULBERT (talk) 13:05, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

So I will try to remember to add four ~ each time I finish writing something. XiaoyaZ (talk) 18:49, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Excellent, XiaoyaZ! Just like you did! --- FULBERT (talk) 17:42, 10 February 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 2 and Check-in from Celine
Hi Professor, please come and check out my article review on my sandbox. Pls feel free to leave any comment or encouragement (:P) on it. CELINEZ (talk) 22:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I will look at this as soon as the first week's work is complete CELINEZ; see my comment above. FULBERT (talk) 15:48, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for replying. I did not figure out which particular comment you were referring to. This means my week2 assignment is not finished? CELINEZ (talk) 23:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
 * See my comment and request here. Thanks, CELINEZ. FULBERT (talk) 23:48, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Please have a look at my article review on my sandbox, FULBERT. Expected to see your comments/questions. CELINEZ (talk) 02:40, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great! CELINEZ. FULBERT (talk) 17:51, 10 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 Check in- Article review Enzhuang Wang
Hi professor, this is my article review aboutNew_York_University. Please check my Sandbox leave yoru comments.Thank you !OliverWang (talk) 23:07, 8 February 2018 (UTC)Enzhuang Wang
 * Good overview of your review OliverWang. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 10 February 2018 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Notre Dame Cristo Rey High School
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Week 2 Assignment and check in from Qianyue
Hello Professor, I wrote the article evaluation about Management information system in my sandbox. Please check the sandbox and leave the comment, thank you. Charlene 1022 (talk) 04:14, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Good points about the lack of citations to reliable sources, Charlene_1022. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:10, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Check-in from HONGYI JIANG
Hi Professor, this is my Talkpage. I wrote my comments here on WeChat Wikipedia item. Please check the link to see if I am doing it the right way. Thanks! Jhy0815 (talk) 00:17, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Nice overview. Would you say that the citations are reliable, fair, and balanced? Jhy0815. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:13, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Hi from Hongyi
Hi professor! Sorry I am late. I am always curious about how Wikipedia works and glad that I have the chance to actually edit it. And I am really excited that there is a place where people gather together and share their thoughts. So looking forward to what we will learn in the future time! Thanks!Jhy0815 (talk) 23:46, 6 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Am I doing it in the right way?Jhy0815 (talk) 23:25, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, all in order. Welcome to Wikipedia! Jhy0815. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:14, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 assignment from Xiaoya
Hi Professor, I review the article Population ageing Please check it in my sandbox and leave your comments.XiaoyaZ (talk) 18:47, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Nice overview, XiaoyaZ. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:17, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 check-in from Wei Hao
Hi Professor here is my talkpage. I made some comments on the Wikipedia page of a Danish furniture designer Hans Wegner. Please check the link and hope to get some feedback from your experiences. Thanks! Wink1021 (talk) 18:34, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Good thoughts here, and I agree with you about the lack of credible citations, Wink1021. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:52, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Copyedit the article assignment from Wei Hao
Hi Professor, I made some edits for the Wikipedia page Coffee Cake and here is the edit review page 1 and page 2. Edits including 1. added another name for Arany galuska 2. deleted two irrelevant images 3. reorder the images in order of the article's subtitle 4. changed the caption of the image Apple coffee cake to Applesauce coffee cake as article mentions Wink1021 (talk) 22:30, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great you were able to experience that session; will look forward to hearing more about it Wink1021! --- FULBERT (talk) 23:48, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

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Please comment on Talk:How Long, Not Long
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Week 1 Assignment from Serina
Hi Professor, sorry for the late check in. This is Serina from your MASY 1260-100 course. I used to use Wikipedia to do some basic research, and it is actually my first time to connect with others and try to do peer review. I am looking forward to learn more from it! SerinaNiux (talk) 18:56, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia, SerinaNiux! FULBERT (talk) 12:37, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Copyedit Check in from Celine
Hi FULBERT, I have made minor structural changes to the article Maria Maggenti, in which I re-organized sections and moved Personal life section before Early Life section. I also made some sentence structural changes in the body. Then I received some comments and re-adjustment afterwards from user editors. Pls feel free to come and check out. Thanks. CELINEZ (talk) 03:25, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Took a look at them. Fine. As your edits were reverted, CELINEZ, what are your thoughts about that (given the reason provided)? FULBERT (talk) 15:59, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Check in Message from Yushuang Li
Hi Professor, I made some changes to the wiki article Greydivorce I make some changes to correct the grammar problems and sentence structure. moreover, I also find one of the reference link is not valid anymore. I summarize this problem in the edit section.YushuangLL (talk) 00:32, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * The link did not work for the article; can you please fix and ping me about it to look again, YushuangLL? Thank you. FULBERT (talk) 16:08, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

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Week 3 Check in Message from Yi Sun
Hi Professor, I made some edits for the wiki article Margo L. Davidson. Here is my record of the change:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Margo_L._Davidson&diff=prev&oldid=825728708. The change I made includes add headings in each section and create a content table for the article to make it more organized. Yisun1 (talk) 15:55, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great edits, Yisun1. What brought you to that page to do edits? FULBERT (talk) 15:56, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

I used Random Article in the left column of wikipedia page. It gave me lots of interesting articles. 216.165.95.161 (talk) 23:14, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Not sure if this is you, Yisun1, but if so, please remember to log on before replying. Otherwise the system only captures your IP address. FULBERT (talk) 12:23, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 assignment from Zhiwei Wang
Hi Professor, I made some change in the article Patiens_of_Lyon. Here is the record of my edition. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Patiens_of_Lyon&type=revision&diff=825723025&oldid=806313880 The change I made included 1, correct "died one September 11" to "died on September 11". 2, delete extra space.Wang1663 (talk) 23:34, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great edits Wang1663. FULBERT (talk) 15:17, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Assignment from Qianyue
Hi Professor, I did some edit in article Management information system and here is the record of edit history https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Management_information_system&type=revision&diff=826622817&oldid=825407102. The first change is avoiding the word "may" gives an assurance that the author is confident of whatever he or she is writing. Another change was to rectify the second sentence in the second paragraph. It was not necessary to use the words "specifically". The third change was to the management section. To avoid repetitive words, I wrote the first sentence as follows "There are different areas of concentration with varying duties and responsibilities in information system managers. "Charlene 1022 (talk) 04:08, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I was not able to see the citation you added to the article. Can you reconfirm it was saved, Charlene 1022? FULBERT (talk) 16:16, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi professor, I only rectified the grammar in the second sentence of the first paragraph, another change was second sentence in the second paragraph. The third change was to the management section, I wrote the first sentence as follows "There are different areas of concentration with varying duties and responsibilities in information system...". That's why I did not add citation, the requirement of week 3 is thinking about ways to improve the language, clarity, grammar, spelling, etc. Then, make the appropriate changes.Charlene 1022 (talk) 17:53, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Ahh, got it Charlene 1022. FULBERT (talk) 15:19, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 4 Assignment from Qianyue
Hi Professor, I did some changes in this article Health technology. Here is the record of edit history https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Health_technology&type=revision&diff=826625523&oldid=825209933. I inserted one citation in this article, the doi is 10.1177/102490790200900410. The article does not discuss in details the negative impacts that are associated with medical technology. Although the article states that medical technology can have ethical and social impacts on health care, it does not discuss the impacts in details. It needs to pinpoint the exact social and ethical issues related to technology. It is important to discuss or highlight a few examples of social and ethical impacts that technology may impose on health care. Therefore, I would add the following drawbacks under medical technology section. Charlene 1022 (talk) 04:28, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Please go back into the article, click edit on the section, right click on the reference to Edit it, and then add the rest of the information for the article (authors, journal, volume, etc.) and ping me when done. It is not a complete citation as listed, Charlene 1022. FULBERT (talk) 16:15, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Good afternoon professor, I have done with the rest of information of the citation in the reference list 7. Charlene 1022 (talk) 19:43, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Got it, Charlene 1022. Great edits! FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Assignment from Xiaoya Zhang
Hi Professor, I made some change in the article Population ageing. Here is the record of my edition. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Population_ageing&diff=prev&oldid=827160006 I only made some small changes that I think may make the article more clear or more coherent. By the way, I am not sure whether there are any differences between ageing and aging. It feels like they are the same, so I did not change anything related to this word though they are not coherent.XiaoyaZ (talk) 03:16, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great edits you identified XiaoyaZ. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:47, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

Week3 Check in from Enzhuang Wang
Hi, professor. I made some changes for this article Alternative names for Northern Ireland. This is my editing record https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alternative_names_for_Northern_Ireland&type=revision&diff=827299818&oldid=827299433 First one I change is " the Ulster Unionist Party, the University of Ulster, BBC Radio Ulster" to "the Ulster Unionist Party, the University of Ulster, and theBBC Radio Ulster." Second one is "how best to respond to" to " how best it was to respond to "

Beside I also restructured it that I moved a paragraph which author used in Others Names section to Unionist-associated names section. Because that paragraph is to talk about the name of Republic of Ireland. OliverWang (talk) 23:11, 23 February 2018 (UTC)Oliver Wang
 * Thanks for the edit updates, OliverWang. Fine. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:38, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 Check-in from Doris
Hi Professor, I have some interesting findings in my article review for zero-sum game. You can check it out in my sandbox. Dorisdd (talk) 03:51, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I am not sure I saw your Week 1 work yet, Dorisdd. Where is that? FULBERT (talk) 12:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I saw the check-in for Week 1 Dorisdd; it was in the archive. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:27, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Good points in your review, Dorisdd! --- FULBERT (talk) 22:28, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Polyandry
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Welcome template
This looks like it could be pretty helpful! I showed this to Ian as well and we have a few notes - you want to avoid quotation marks unless you're using a direct quote. Also, some of the nitty gritty with the coding for this will likely have to take place in source mode, as some things like signatures don't show up properly in VisualEditor. The Template WikiProject would be a good place to check out on that end, as I'm not as familiar with that end and this would likely fall under their banner since the welcome message does serve as a template of sorts to some extent. I think that it's awesome that you're interested in this! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:15, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, Shalor (Wiki Ed). I still have some testing to do, though am glad you think the concept is useful! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

This Month in Education: February 2018
This Month in Education  Volume 7 | Issue 2 | February 2018

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Week 2 Assignment from Serina
Hi Professor, this is Serina in your MASY 1260-100 class. In this week, I did the review for Wiki article Grammy Award, and please check my User:SerinaNiux/sandbox to see my article and leave a comment. Thank you! -- SerinaNiux (talk) 19:45, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Please add a link in your Sandbox review to the article you are critiquing, and then ping me here and I will go take a look, SerinaNiux. FULBERT (talk) 12:39, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi professor, I have added the article I am critiquing. Please check the updated version. Thank you. --SerinaNiux (talk) 19:52, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks SerinaNiux. Got it! --- FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 check-in message from Qi
Hi professor, I have assigned myself the article Virtual prototyping. In this article, I changed several sentence structure issues to make it more clear. Please check the changes. Also, I noticed that the original article linked by the reference for NCE in examples (reference #11) is missing. I could not find any other resource to support it. Should I delete it? Shine821 (talk) 19:46, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
 * The link to the article does not work; can you fix it here and then re-ping me, Shine821? Thank you. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:49, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, I have tried FULBERT. The original file is missing, and I could not find archive file in the Machine Design and Google.Shine821 (talk) 20:07, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I suggest removing the sentence (and thus the citation itself) and in the change summary pop-up window, stating something like "The link to the citation was broken, and the reference itself could not be located, thus it was removed." Please restate in your own words and then ping me about it again here, Shine821. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:43, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the help, FULBERT. The sentence and citation were both removed. Please check the change summary. Shine821 (talk) 05:20, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Shine821. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:29, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Check-in from Doris
Hi Professor, I've made some changes to the wiki article Zero-sum game. I updated the link for reference #5 to a valid one and changed the retrieval date. My record of changes can be located here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zero-sum_game&diff=827641320&oldid=817132929 and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zero-sum_game&diff=827643706&oldid=827641320 Dorisdd (talk) 22:28, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks Dorisdd. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:35, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 5 check-in message from Qi
Hello professor FULBERT, I have assigned myself two new articles, which are Second life (SL) and Cave automatic virtual environment (CAVE). In the Second life, I added new example about West Virginia University on using SL in its distance education program. In the Cave automatic virtual environment, new sentence of how CAVE is an accessibal and effective tool in research was added in the application section. Both citations were included. Shine821 (talk) 05:40, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I tweaked one of the edits you made, but overall they were helpful to the article Shine821! --- FULBERT (talk) 15:53, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week4 check-in message from Qi
Hi professor FULBERT, I have added some new contents in the article Sensorama. The reference info is also provided after the added sentence.Shine821 (talk) 20:34, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I made a couple minor tweaks of your contribution for clarity, Shine821. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:49, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks FULBERT, it looks better. Shine821 (talk) 16:31, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 2 Assignment from Lance
Hello professor, this is Lance.

In this week, I did the review for Wiki article Industry 4.0, and please check my User:LanceLam/sandbox to see my article. Cheers! LanceLam 19:34, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Copyedit one article from Lance
Hello professor, I've made some changes to the wiki article Industry 4.0. I updated the link for reference #17 to a valid one and also changed the retrieval date. I renamed the title for reference #10 from "You Have Reached a 404 Page" to "This Is Not the Fourth Industrial Revolution". This is the record of changes: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Industry_4.0&diff=828305477&oldid=827929698 LanceLam 20:08, 1 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by LanceLam (talk • contribs)

Week 4 Contribute to one article from Lance
Hello Professor, I made some changes to the wiki article called depression. This is the link of difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Smart_manufacturing&diff=828313139&oldid=820081515 I added more evidence under the section "Open Manufacturing" to support the claim that open manufacturing is a new way to look outside the walls of the factory to find the missing know-how and techniques, together with the most profitable way to take advantage of them. LanceLam 20:52, 1 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by LanceLam (talk • contribs)

Week 4 check in message from Yi Sun
Hi Professor, I added new contents and reference in Antibiotic use in livestock. Here is my edit history https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Antibiotic_use_in_livestock&diff=828288052&oldid=828284120. Please check it. Yisun1 (talk) 18:00, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Good resources added Yisun1. I refined the section a bit to help strengthen it a bit more. --- FULBERT (talk) 12:12, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 Assignment from Serina
Hi professor, I made some minor changes to the article called Management of depression, and here is the link for the changes: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Management_of_depression&diff=prev&oldid=828294532. Basically, I fixed a few grammar mistakes the article had, and made some other changes to make the sentence become more concise or look more clear to the readers. --SerinaNiux (talk) 18:58, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Good edits SerinaNiux to a valuable topic --- FULBERT (talk) 12:15, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Week 3 check-in from Hongyi Jiang
Hi Professor, I made a few edit in the Beijing Foreign Studies University page. I changed the departments of International Business School according to the official website of this school. I can't remember what it originally was but I almost changed all the departments. Here is the record: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Beijing_Foreign_Studies_University&diff=prev&oldid=828001037 Thanks! Hongyi Jhy0815 (talk) 00:32, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Please list the article you reviewed on the Wiki Ed page and then re-ping me here, Jhy0815. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:38, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, i have listed them. Please check. Thanks! HongyiJhy0815 (talk) 00:05, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks Jhy0815. I think this articles itself needs a lot of work (as it really does not contribute much based on credible resources), but you did what you needed to! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:24, 3 March 2018 (UTC)