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Week 4 / Assignment 4 / RaymondZqiu
Hi, this is Raymond and it's my 4th post. 1. I add the rank of Wanda Group on the 2020 China Top 500 Private Enterprises List. 2. Link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wanda_Group&type=revision&diff=1052965019&oldid=1046437252 3. I realized the source of reference should be reliable. --RaymondZqiu (talk) 03:38, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 21:05, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT, I have assigned myself this article. Thank you!--RaymondZqiu (talk) 04:06, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Great. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:19, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Feedback request: Social sciences and society Good Article nomination
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Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Nenenie
Hi, everyone. Here is Haoxuan Nie's week 2 report.

1. I found that my assigned article is rated C level, which means there is a lot to fill in. The article uses a number of sub-headings to describe in detail where this climate exists on different continents. The content of the article is also related to the topic, but the whole article does not cite many reliable sources, which needs to be added.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Humid_subtropical_climate

3. I think actively adding in-text citations in every sentence of the article can enhance the professionalism and credibility of the article, making it a good entry. A good article requires a neutral tone, a clear structure, balanced content, and good citations. --Nenenie (talk) 22:51, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Nenenie Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:43, 18 October 2021 (UTC)


 * FULBERT Dear professor, I completed the article evaluation, here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nenenie/Evaluate_an_Article --Nenenie (talk) 00:07, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice work. Current for this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:47, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Second Post / bl2240
1. The article that I choose was "Asian Hip Pop". This is currently a level C article and needs many improvements. The history background part seems to be incomplete and many key figures and people were not added to the article. The citation also has some issues and some do not contain one. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bl2240/Evaluate_an_Article 3. I learned that all articles should be reviewed and evaluated before sending to the public. If not, others would get incomplete or false information. --Bl2240 (talk) 07:01, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:49, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi, I just assign myself the article in the Dashboard. Please check it out, thx! --Bl2240 (talk) 05:20, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice overview, and current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Third Post / bl2240
1. The article that I copyedited was "Changpeng Zhao" (The CEO of Binance). 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&type=revision&diff=1050501631&oldid=1047007898 3. I learned that Wikipedia is free for all to edit, yet we should be extra careful when doing our editing. In this case, the original writer did not provide the DOB for Changpeng Zhao. --Bl2240 (talk) 07:07, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE" because the source you used is not as credible or reliable as would be ideal. However, being your first edit, I will accept. Nice learning to edit, though please use a more credible source (a journal article, Statista, NYTimes, etc.) next time. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:52, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here and it will then be complete and with your credit. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:53, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Thanks and I added this one in the Dashboards. --Bl2240 (talk) 05:26, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , You actually added a citation, so beyond what was needed for this week. You are current. FULBERT (talk) 22:52, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Second Post / Jjjjdddd199704
Hello, this is dongjunjie's second week post

1. I found that the articles I assigned belong to the Academic disciplines category. This article answers very rigorously. This article is defined and recognized by the academic journals that publish the research results, as well as the academic groups and academic departments or faculties in the colleges and universities where the practitioners belong. At the same time, it has a very comprehensive references as a support, so that readers can obtain a lot of useful knowledge from it 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cross-cultural_communication 3. I learned how to add citations in the text correctly in this article to enhance the professionalism and credibility of the article. 4.the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjjjdddd199704/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_article --Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 04:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice overview. Current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:54, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Third Post / Jjjjdddd199704
1. The article that I copyedited was "Ren Zhengfei" (The CEO of Huawei). 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ren_Zhengfei 3. Because everyone can edit the wiki, I afarid to provide errors Information, and I checked my reference again and again. In this change, I found that the original text did not mention Ren Zhengfei’s ranking and wealth in Forbes, so I added "In April 2021, the Forbes Global Rich List was released, and Ren Zhengfei ranked 2378 on the list with a fortune of 1.3 billion US dollars. "this sentence. 4. the link of "Ren Zhengfei"'s Bibliography, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjjjdddd199704/Ren_Zhengfei/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography --Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 04:48, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great! Current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:54, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ TFMonk19970531
Hi everyone! This is Tianhao Fu. This is my first time editing with Wikipedia and I am very excited! TFMonk19970531 (talk) 07:39, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia, and I hope you find this an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 22:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ SABA90S
Hi, This is Saba. I did assign an article for this week, and then I evaluated the assigned article. Please see the below link of the sandbox I created to see the process of what I have done. --SABA90S (talk) 15:58, 20 October 2021 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SABA90S/Evaluate_an_Article
 * Nice work! Current. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:27, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Cloi929
Hi everyone! Here is Ruijia Liang. I am so excited to editing Wikipedia. And Let's be "Wikipediar". --Cloi929 (talk) 12:38, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this a valuable experience! FULBERT (talk) 01:28, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week1/ Assignment 1/ Beccabubu
Hi everyone, this is Huachen Bu, I'm really excited at the opportunity to contribute to Wikipedia! Come along! --Beccabubu (talk) 12:01, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this a valuable experience! FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Copyedit an Article/ Nenenie
1. My Copyedit article is "A Madman's Diary". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Madman%27s_Diary

2. I just added some details and change some words that can make the article more specific. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Madman%27s_Diary&type=revision&diff=1051127236&oldid=1045458837

3. I was worried about revising the article at first. I was afraid I didn't know enough about it and would make mistakes. So I chose a topic that I particularly liked and knew well. I think by adding some details, readers can better understand the main idea of the article and feel the feelings the author wants to express. Make the story described in the theme more vivid. --Nenenie (talk) 18:47, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is fine for now. You may want to add a citation to this as well given the amount you contributed, though I think this is good enough for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Gdaymate011
Hello, I hope you are all doing well, this is Kai Wu's report for the week 2 assignment. This article I assigned to myself is related to stock market protection. It's a class C level article so there is plenty of room for improvement. For this article, I found that it has a daily average of 146 views. there are some issues of the content are lack of evidence and support, the stock analysis method is currently missing, such as the current ratio, Return on Equity, etc. None of these important methods for stock market analysis are listed; moreover, these content will be added on.

Link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stock_market_prediction

what I have learned in the process is by adding technical content into theoretical content can better enhance the credibility of the article.Gdaymate011 (talk) 01:20, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Dear Professor, the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gdaymate011/Evaluate_an_Article  Gdaymate011 (talk) 04:13, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please remember to indent your replies with one colon ":  " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 22:50, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * User:FULBERT fixed format
 * I will mark this as completed, but please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Assignment 2 is now current. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Feedback request: Philosophy and religion Good Article nomination
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Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Notkc01
Hi everyone, this is Kyle. I am glad to be here and have my first editing experience with Wikipedia.Notkc01 (talk) 06:52, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this an interesting and exciting experience! FULBERT (talk) 10:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

week1/assignment1/Jw6740
Hi professor, this is Jing. It is my first time editing the wiki and I am excited to learn more skills. Jw6740 (talk) 17:43, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find learning to edit to be interesting! FULBERT (talk) 13:44, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1 / Assignment 1/Chenjshi
Hello professor, This is Chenjshi(Yuqiong), it is my first time editing Wikipedia, i hope i can learn a lot from this part. Chenjshi (talk) 19:12, 24 October 2021 (UTC) Chenjshi(talk) 01:07, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia! Make sure to add a space before signing, as it did not capture your full Wikipedia name (it was not turned into a link). --- FULBERT (talk) 21:49, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Make sure to preview it and confirm you are logged on first. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:07, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Wikidata weekly summary #491
Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week. 


 * Events
 * Upcoming:
 * WikidataCon is happening this week! Don’t forget to register if you want to attend!
 * ISKO UK Hands-on Meetup - Introduction to Wikibase (register on meetup)
 * WikidataCon Bioblitz (During WikidataCon)
 * Ongoing:
 * Weekly Lexemes Challenge #13, Death
 * Past:
 * Wikidata+Wikibase office hour log (2021-10-20)
 * Wikiarabia Algeria 2021: Wikibase Presentation - Mohammed Sadat Abdulai and Georgina Burnett
 * Talk at Wikidata Workshop 2021 - Mathematics In Wikidata
 * LibreOffice Conference 2021 - Enhancing a spellcheck dictionary by Wikidata Lexemes
 * LIVE Wikidata editing #58 - YouTube, Facebook
 * Wikipedia Weekly Network: Wikipedia podcast section #152 - Wikidata + Wikipedia: fact templates (in Swedish)
 * Online Wikidata meetup in Swedish #84


 * Press, articles, blog posts, videos
 * Blogs
 * The Buggregator
 * AutoDesc Reloaded by Magnus Manske
 * Awesome Wikidata notebooks
 * Close to the Edge - Graph Databases through 1970s Prog Rock
 * Videos
 * How to upload Australian Faunal Directory IDs to Wikidata using OpenRefine. Part I, Part II, Part III, Part IV
 * PhysWikiQuiz - a Physics Formula Question Generation and Test Engine using Wikidata in Education - YouTube
 * Timelapse of churches in the Americas (Wikidata, QGIS) - YouTube
 * UseAsRef 2.0 - adding references using external IDs and other statements on Wikidata - YouTube
 * Addressing the gender gap - Wikidata and SPARQL queries (in French) - YouTube
 * Understanding Wikidata: a free and open knowledge base (in French) - YouTube
 * WikidataTutorial: Learn how to edit / create items on Wikidata (in French) - YouTube
 * Linked Data and Wikidata (in Italian) - YouTube


 * Tool of the week
 * User:Bargioni/UseAsRef has now a 2.0 version, allowing to use as references not only external IDs but also some other properties (P1343, P973, P8214 etc.)


 * Other Noteworthy Stuff
 * QID ("Initialism of Q-identifier, a unique identifier for an item in Wikidata. [from 2012]") now has an entry in Wiktionary
 * The 3rd edition of the Coolest Tool Award is looking for nominations (see announcement on wikimedia-l). Please submit your favorite tools by October 27th. The awarded projects will be announced and showcased in a virtual ceremony in December.


 * Did you know?


 * Newest properties:
 * General datatypes: stylized name, record number, excitation energy
 * External identifiers: Bat Sheva Archive ID, Literature.com book ID, Literature.com ebook ID, CantoDict word ID, CantoDict character ID, MYmovies person ID, Chi era Costui plaque ID, Bowers acronym, Turkish Cinema Archive Database person ID, Research Vocabularies Australia ID, Austrian Football Association player ID, Dewan Negara ID, Arachne.org.au ID, Dewan Rakyat ID, Remontees-mecaniques.net ID, AllSides ID, Birdata ID, Geographical Names Board of NSW geoname ID, IRIS GSSI author ID, IRIS IUSS author ID, SISSA Digital Library author ID, NSW Parliament member ID, SNSF person ID, FFCAM ID


 * New property proposals to review:
 * General datatypes: Conway polyhedron notation, Nombre de voies routières, Museu da Pessoa Story, Official forum, Properties for legislation, Stack Exchange user ID
 * External identifiers: Toolhub ID, Spotify user ID, Dizionario di Medicina ID, Dizionario delle Scienze Fisiche ID, ORIAS number, Meetup group id, UAE ID, Tennis Abstract player ID, Museu da Pessoa person ID, SoccerPunter player ID, allplayers.in.ua player ID, pfl.uz player ID, ua-football.com player ID, Offshore leaks database ID, Snob.ru author ID, TASS Encyclopedia ID, Corporate Identification Number (CIN) in India, DFIH financier ID, DFIH business ID, Chuvash Encyclopedia ID, Kola Encyclopedia ID, IndexCat ID, Lithuanian Heritage Registry code, Penza Encyclopedia ID, SEKO-ID, Musées Nationaux Récupération ID, Women in the Legislature ID, Dissernet person ID, Dissernet institution ID, Dissernet journal ID, Enciclopedia di Roma person ID, Vokrug.tv show ID


 * Query examples:
 * Map of mosques (Source)
 * Documents from the Boyer collection by decades, subjects most represented (Source)
 * Pronouns of people in different languages (Source)
 * Twitter accounts of libraries in Switzerland (Source)
 * Images of cell types in Wikidata (Source)
 * Map of the place of death of people born in Puy-de-Dôme (Source)
 * Graph of NFDI consortia with their fields of work, the map of (co-)applicants, (Source)
 * Places where people in South-America work who published on Wikidata (Source)
 * Rail link between Narvik and Singapore (Source)


 * Development
 * The new WDQS Streaming Updater now fully shipped to production. This will help the Query Service better deal with the amount of edits happening on Wikidata. (more information)
 * Mismatch Finder: Continuing work on the results page where mismatches are shown for review. We are focusing on showing all necessary information for a mismatch to make a good determination if it is a mismatch in Wikidata, the external source or neither.
 * Finishing the work on the new change dispatching system that improves how Wikipedia and the other Wikimedia projects are notified about edits happening on Wikidata that affect them. Currently tying up some lose ends.
 * Preparing for WikidataCon.

You can see all open tickets related to Wikidata here. If you want to help, you can also have a look at the tasks needing a volunteer.


 * Monthly Tasks
 * Add labels, in your own language(s), for the new properties listed above.
 * Comment on property proposals: all open proposals
 * Contribute to a Showcase item.
 * Help translate or proofread the interface and documentation pages, in your own language!
 * Help merge identical items across Wikimedia projects.
 * Help write the next summary!

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This Month in Education: October 2021
About This Month in Education · Subscribe/Unsubscribe · Global message delivery · For the team: ZI Jony 15:40, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Growth Newsletter #19
Welcome to the nineteenth newsletter from the Growth team!

The Growth team's objective is to work on software changes that help retain new contributors in Wikimedia projects.

Structured tasks

 * "Add a link" is the team's first structured task. It uses machine-learning to suggest wikilinks as easy edits for newcomers. It was deployed in May 2021 on four Wikipedias and then in July on eight more Wikipedias after we evaluated the initial results.  So far, we've seen a high level of engagement from newcomers. Communities that have the feature suggested valuable ideas for improvement.  We'll work on improvements and then contact more communities to deploy it.
 * "Add an image" is the team's second structured task, currently in development. It is an editing task that suggests Commons images for unillustrated Wikipedia articles.  We have conducted many community discussions and tests. Then, we've decided to build a first prototype.  We'll first deploy it only to our pilot Wikipedias, to learn whether newcomers can be successful with the task. The project page contains links to interactive prototypes. We are very interested to hear your thoughts on this idea as we build and test the early versions. These prototypes have already been tested by newcomers, in English and Spanish.

News for mentors

 * The Mentor dashboard is available at our pilot wikis: Arabic, Czech, and Bengali Wikipedias. It will soon be available at a few more volunteering wikis, as a test.
 * At wikis where the mentor dashboard is deployed, a new filter is available for mentors. Mentors can monitor their mentees' activity in Watchlist and RecentChanges, so they can help support their mentees' work. For privacy reasons, this filter can't be accessed by someone else than the mentor itself. This filter only filters mentees assigned to the mentor. This filter is not visible for people who are not listed as mentors

Community configuration

 * Communities now have the ability to configure how Growth features behave on their own wikis. At Special:EditGrowthConfig, community members can add a list of volunteer mentors, alter the templates used for suggested edits, update help links, and more. This special page is editable by administrators and interface admins.

Scaling

 * We are proud to announce that all Wikipedias now have the Growth features! Thank you to all the community members who helped the team build the features and bring them to their wikis.  The only exception is Chinese Wikipedia (zh), for technical reasons.
 * The wikis that have Growth features deployed have been part of A/B testing since deployment, in which some newcomers did not receive the new features. Now, all of the newcomers on 280 of the smallest of those Wikipedias have the features.
 * A test is undergoing at English Wikipedia: 25% of newcomers receive the Growth features. The results from this test will be part of a discussion of how to proceed on that wiki.
 * Now that Growth features are available at Wikipedia, the Growth team considers to extend them to other projects. Some Wikisource users have expressed some interest in getting Growth features. There is currently a discussion about implementing them on Wikisource.

News for communities

 * Do you have questions about the Growth features? This translatable FAQ contains answers to the most common questions about the Growth team work.
 * The Growth features were recently used in a test amongst Latin American donors to give donors the opportunity to learn to edit. You can see the results here.
 * Interface translations are important for newcomers. Please help for your language, by translating or copyediting interface translations for the Growth features.
 * Help:GettingStarted was a feature developed in 2013, which directed newcomers to articles that needed editing. We recently removed this feature from all wikis, because it has been replaced by the Growth features.

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Week 1 / Assignment 1/yf2196
Hello professor, I am YiFan Feng. This is my first time editing Wikipedia and I am very excited. I don’t know why the content I uploaded disappeared. This is the second time I have written this content. I hope it can be saved and let me complete my learning goals. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yifannn (talk • contribs) 04:19, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Yifannn Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2/ Assignment 2/ Beccabubu

 * The article I assign is “communication studies”. Good communication skills are essential to allow others and yourself to understand information more accurately and quickly, so I find it is interesting to learn more about this area.
 * There are some issues with this article, so I made some adjustment advice below: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Beccabubu/Evaluate_an_Article
 * I think the whole process of evaluating a Wikipedia article is fun and challenging; it gives value to my knowledge and helps me learn about new things. --Beccabubu (talk) 13:53, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice work. Please do not indent your initial posts here; only indent replies. OK for now and Week 2 is now current. FULBERT (talk) 01:39, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Gdaymate011
Hello, this is Kai Wu's third assignment 1: My copyedited article is the "Opium War".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opium_Wars.

2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Opium_Wars&type=revision&diff=1051895188&oldid=1050470888.

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I'm very interested in history. Therefore, I hope to make this historical article more complete through my own contribution. Through my reading of this article, I found that many parts are not quite complete. I added some historical background at the beginning, hoping to make the article more detailed.

4: The link for the article "the Opium War" bibliography:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gdaymate011/Opium_Wars/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography Gdaymate011 (talk) 06:22, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice work. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Sleep by 11
This week I learned how to assign an article while looking up references online. I have a better understanding of this editing system, including how to edit an encyclopedia and how to build one. The whole process is as rigorous as writing an academic paper.Sleep by 11 (talk) 16:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/assignment 1/huilin826
This is huilin, this is my first time using Wikipedia and editing it. It will be hard for me, but I will try my best. Huilin826 (talk) 07:04, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia; hoping you find it an exciting space! FULBERT (talk) 23:52, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Notkc01
Hi everyone, This is Kyle. Hope everyone is having a good week. Here is my Week2 assignment.

1. The article is about physical fitness and it gives people with any level of fitness knowledge with a general idea of the fitness world.

2. The link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Physical_fitness#High_intensity_interval_training

3. The article made a good general introduction for physical fitness but I found that each training category was only described by one sentence. For some categories, the information is not accurate and can be revised. Here is my evaluation link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Evaluate_an_Article Notkc01 (talk) 13:15, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice work on Week 2. Done. FULBERT (talk) 00:07, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

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Week2-Assignment 2 - Amber MWY
Hello, everyone, this is Amber. 1. I found an article that talked about the Chinese language, but its timeline is not very clear. The 1950s is very important for the revolution of the Chinese. so I edited it be highlighted in bold. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_language 3. A good article should have very clear. A good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:59, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2021 (UTC)


 * , Hi professor, I did it but I do not know why it did not show that https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article--Amber MWY (talk) 11:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , The page this sent me to was not your completed evaluation. Please review the training as the link to do it is in there. Ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)


 * , Hi professor, I found this page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article. Please check it, Thank you.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:01, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , OK, now answer some of the questions for the evaluation itself. It asks you questions on the top of the page so answer some of them on the bottom. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:47, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * ,Dear Professor, I answered it again. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article Thank you!--Amber MWY (talk) 15:04, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is still a bit short, but good enough for now. Week 2 is done. FULBERT (talk) 01:47, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Thank you, Professor!--Amber MWY (talk) 03:59, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Fourth Post / bl2240
Hi All,

1. This week I was working on the article the same as last one, which is "Asian Hip Pop". There was citation missing in 1990's Chinese hip pop on a very important person in the music history of modern China, Cui Jian. I added the reference, which was a journal written by Andreas Steen on Chinese pop music.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Asian_hip_hop&type=revision&diff=1052462043&oldid=1038493053

3. I learn that citation is vital in a published article since it establishes the credibility of the article, especially when it comes to historical events we should pay extra attention to using the references from credible sources. --Bl2240 (talk) 08:33, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice source added. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:13, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2/Assignment2/Jw6740
1.	I found an article about electronic business which is related to the topic of my research paper. After reviewing the article, I found it still has room to improve such as the lack of images and references, the content also can be improved as well. 2.	Here is the link to my article evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Evaluate_an_Article 3. 	What I learned from this process is the importance of the peer view of any article that will be published for others to look at. With more evaluations, the article can be improved to a more accurate level. Jw6740 (talk) 15:10, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice overview. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 15:26, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Nenenie
1. I added a citation about the commentary to the novel. It roughly describes the social and historical background reflected in the story and thus brings changes to the protagonist, making a protagonist with clear thoughts persecuted and assimilated due to social decay. It was also a chilling instance of the era.

2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Madman%27s_Diary&type=revision&diff=1052388228&oldid=1051512079

3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance the persuasions and make the language more authoritative and powerful. At the same time, it also increases readers' clearer and deeper understanding of the article. --Nenenie (talk) 22:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice addition. Remember, try to write in an encyclopedia tone, which means avoid conversation or what may be perceived as biased language. Overall, fine. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:28, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Cloi929
1.my copyedited article is: Steinhardt, N. (2019). Chinese architecture : A history. Princeton University Press. https://www.proquest.com/docview/2193647558/$N?accountid=12768&forcedol=true&forcedol=true 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_architecture&diff=1052774604&oldid=1052686089 3.At first I was nervous, I was afraid that I would make some mistakes, like grammatical errors. But I am happy when I finished. For me, I like ancient Chinese architecture very much. Let more people to have a deeper understanding of ancient Chinese architecture. I think it's great!Cloi929 (talk) 06:41, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This source is good though it points to a database. Can you fix it so it points to the book's ISBN? This involves only editing that one source you inserted. Ping me here when you are finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:40, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Notkc01
Hi, this is Kyle.

1: The article I copyedited is "Plyometrics". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plyometrics

2: I have some grammar mistakes in the article to help improve the readability. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Plyometrics&diff=1052448972&oldid=1034084692

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I go to the gym regularly and I have tried different training methods and menus. Plyometrics is definitely one of the essential movements that one needs to add to his or her workout routine if he or she wants to pursue higher athleticism.

4: The link for the article "Plyometrics" bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Plyometrics/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 06:32, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Notkc01
Hi guys, this is Kyle.

1. The article I assigned is "split jump". The link to the article：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Split_jump_(exercise)

2. This article is very short and there is no citation on it. In order to make people who want to have a deeper understanding of this exercise and its pros and cons, I feel like I need to add some citations. I added one sentence to the article to help elaborate the usage of a certain type of exercise and I also cited a journal article to help increase the credibility. Here is the diff-link of my revision: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Split_jump_(exercise)&diff=1052457297&oldid=744899863

3. Here is the assigned link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Split_jump_(exercise)/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 07:41, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Copyedit an Article/ SABA90S
I have chosen an article relevant to the travel business as I am passionate about this topic. I have read this article and went through it to see if there are any mistakes. However, it was hard for me to try to find something in a professional article at the beginning. I have realized a couple of pronunciation and grammar mistakes. I edited and modified all of the mistakes I found and published the changes. Here is the article link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships

And also my bibliography page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SABA90S/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships/Bibliography. --SABA90S (talk) 14:27, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:03, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Please see the below link of the diff. --SABA90S (talk) 18:03, 29 October 2021 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships&diff=1051278608&oldid=1051271324
 * , I am not sure how you got the coding around your reply, though next time please just use " : " with replies. This is fine, though did you see the change that was then done with your edits? It is fine for this week (current with Week 3) though Wikipedia articles maintain either British or American English within an article, however it was initially written, for consistency. Good enough for now. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:46, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Second Post / bh2278
1.The article that I choose was "Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the food industry". This is currently a level C article and needs many improvements. The classification of countries could be more organized. The data and the situation of many countries can be improved. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BaixinH/Evaluate_an_Article 3. I learned that to write a good article, many factors need to be considered, including content, typesetting, structure and neutral of the article, which will affect the quality of the article.BaixinH (talk) 19:27, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice review. You are current. FULBERT (talk) 15:54, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ bh2278
1. My copyedited article is the "Sina Weibo".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sina_Weibo 2. I correct and error and add the current situation of some company.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sina_Weibo&type=revision&diff=1052620283&oldid=1049343540 3. The lesson I learned is that Wiki is a free and public knowledge platform, we should be careful when we read and edit it. It is our responsibility to take care of the content we write. So I need to check the information through many resource.BaixinH (talk) 06:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Week3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 15:58, 30 October 2021 (UTC)