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Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Cecilia haha
1. This article describes the disruption of shipping routes caused by the pandemic among shipping companies worldwide. I added the effect section in the 2021 Global Supply Chain Crisis.

2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article

3. In this process, I have gained more directions and a deeper understanding of the part I researched, and at the same time, I can help others understand the influence of the Supply Chain in this process.--Cecilia haha (talk) 20:16, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , I see that you created your review page, though I do not see you answering any of the questions you have there. Please answer some of them as part of your review and then ping me here and I will come and review them. FULBERT (talk) 11:00, 23 October 2021 (UTC)


 * FULBERT, I answered the questions. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F Please look at it. Thank you!Cecilia haha (talk) 22:21, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Where did you answer the questions asked from the top of that page? For example, did you answer the questions, "Is the article neutral?" or "Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?" --- FULBERT (talk) 23:28, 24 October 2021 (UTC)


 * I am sorry about that! I rewrite the evalutation and here is my update.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_articleCecilia haha (talk) 00:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT, I added the colon: before each level--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great! Week 2 is current. FULBERT (talk) 16:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Third Post/ Cecilia haha
1. I copyedited Jack Ma's wiki. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_Ma

2. The link after i edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Jack_Ma/Bibliography I edited two sentences in Jack Ma's biliography. 1)"In April 2021, Jack Ma ranked 26th in the "2021 Forbes Global Rich List" with a fortune of US$48.4 billion." 2) "In August 2014, according to the Bloomberg Billionaires Index, Jack Ma has a net worth of US$21.8 billion, making him the richest man in China." 3. Since I changed the bibliography, I need to go to the official website to ensure his information is correct and reliable. Although Jack Ma is a very famous person, I found that Wikipedia still had some omissions when I searched for his life records. I discovered that although Wikipedia has records for many things or people, the records are not very comprehensive.Cecilia haha (talk) 23:32, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT, here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jack_Ma&diff=prev&oldid=1051675767 I edited the article two times, so it look similiary sometimes.--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:23, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great. This is now fine. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 16:02, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/Assignment/Chenjshi
Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi (yuqiong)’s assignment 2. 1. The article I assigned is QR code payment, and this is a way of mobile payment. The topic of my article is the discussion about mobile payments, and they are related. 2. In my opinion, some mobile payment applications can be added to the article, not only in transportation, such as in daily life and store payment. We can use mobile payment to buy goods in the supermarket, and merchants can also provide a QR code for the payment. (Venmo, Quick pay and Zella). 3. This is link to the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/QR_code_paymentChenjshi (talk) 02:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC) 4. This is the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chenjshi/Evaluate_an_ArticleChenjshi (talk) 01:22, 29 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi(talk)
 * , Please fix the structure of your reply here and then ping me again and I will review. Right now, it is difficult to read as there are few spaces between sentences and it does not follow the steps of the assignment. FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , OK for now. Week 2 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:07, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week1/ Assignment-introduction/ Emilyyxx
Hi, this is Emily. It is also my first time editing on Wikipedia. I used to get on Wikipedia to learn materials quite often, and feel excited to actually have an account here.--Emilyyxx (talk) 02:36, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find learning this to be an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 16:08, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2/ Assignment-Article Evaluation/ Emilyyxx
1. I chose the topic I am interested in and evaluate the article by assessing the contents and the lead by determining whether they have enough reliable resources, if they are structured or not, if the information is clear enough to allow readers find what they are searching for, and whether the contents are well organized.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyyxx/Evaluate_an_Article

3. Before working on the Wikipedia pages or when I was only a reader, I never tried to evaluate the contents on Wikipedia, so I often assumed the information are trustful, even though I know it is edited by the public. However, after I went through the Talk Page, I understand that the editors sometimes have different thoughts and have problems with the contents and the references are sometimes not so reliable. Therefore, looking up information on Wikipedia required a careful review. --Emilyyxx (talk) 05:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice job with your article evaluation. Current fore Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:09, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3/ Assignment-Copyedit an Article/ Emilyyxx
1. [|The Samoyed] is my favorite dog kind, so I decided to work on it.

2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Samoyed_dog&type=revision&diff=1052454840&oldid=1052109728

3. While I was making the minor change, I was also able to review other people's editing history. Although the article is not too long, a large number of minor changes are contributed by many people. It is probably the power of Wikipedia that everyone can make a tiny step and finally complete better organized and informative article to help readers understand the different contents. --Emilyyxx (talk) 07:24, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice minor edit to that article. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 16:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / assignment 4/ sunnydayreading
Hi,

I added two citations for Amazon about its environmental pledge under the Environmental impact section. The information under the Environmental impact section contains both positive movements and negative incidents. However, there is not enough information about the environmental pledge. Therefore, I added some statistics, the number of signatories and industries among the world,to make it more detailed. I learned the importance of citations. Citation allows us to incorporate others’ ideas and gives credit to the author. Also, it is important to check whether the citation is the latest. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Amazon_(company)&diff=1052461764&oldid=1052417836

Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:43, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice addition of the source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4/ Assignment-Citation/ Emilyyxx
1. Baotou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for its nickname. The cited source is an encyclopedia website about Baotou introducing the city.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Baotou&type=revision&diff=1052467786&oldid=1050938784

3. Although citation can be added by one simple click, the research process can be time-consuming. Secondary sources are normally proper for Wikipedia editing since we want to avoid original research. --Emilyyxx (talk) 09:40, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice addition of the source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2 / assignment 2/ sunnydayreading
Good evening,

I have done my first article evaluation and posted it to the sandbox. Here is the link to the sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunnydayreading/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F

Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 05:06, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice article evaluation. You are current for Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3 / assignment 3/ sunnydayreading
Hi,

I copyedited Uniqlo for the assignment of this week. Because the information about the existing operating number of store is lagging. So, I made changes based on the report of Uniqlo. I modified the of number of stores in Austria, Korea, China, Uk, USA, France, Spain and Philippines. In the beginning, I did not check my work before submission. However, I found several typo from myself. Therefore, I went back to the edit page and made change. For the next time, I will double check it before any submission.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uniqlo&diff=prev&oldid=1052456267

Sincerely

Sunnydayreading (talk) 07:49, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Sunnydayreading Nice edit on this. Week 3 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / assignment 4/ bh2278
1. This week I was working on the article talk about Tencent. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tencent. It tells the specific location of Tencent and doesn't provide a reference. So I add the Tencent Annual Report from the Hong Kong Exchanges and Clearing Limited.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tencent&type=revision&diff=1052626028&oldid=1052574928

3. I learn that the editor needs to be careful about every sentence he writes. Every sentence or fact need a reference to support it.BaixinH (talk) 06:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:58, 30 October 2021 (UTC)


 * hi, I have already assign myself the article. BaixinH (talk) 16:09, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great. Nice edit. Current for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/assignment 2/Huilin826
The article is the Australian Jazz Museum was held at the Whitehorse Hotel, Melbourne, in August 1996. It is also accredited by the national film and sound archive of Australia as being part of the national material, Australian Jazz Museum is open to the public on Tuesday and Friday. It is a sign of Australian Jazz, creating more platforms for jazz music. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australian_Jazz_Museum


 * Huilin826 Please remove the extra information at the end of your signature (you do not have to repeat it) and then ping me here and I will review. Please first do Week 1. Ping me when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay, I think is right. Huilin826 (talk) 23:25, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is ok for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:26, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/assignment 3/Huilin826
The article I found related to music history because I am so interested in any type of music, such as pop, rock, and jazz. Different types of music bring specific feelings to audiences. This is my first time editing it, it is so hard for me. I must find some mistakes in the grammar and pronunciation. There is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Music_history


 * Huilin826 Please remove the extra information at the end of your signature (you do not have to repeat it) and then ping me here and I will review. Please first do Week 1. Ping me when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Huilin826 (talk) 23:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Tzc0725
Tzc0725 (talk) 22:34, 26 October 2021 (UTC) What I Did and What I Learned

This week I have created a Wikipedia Account by going to the homepage of Wikipedia and clicking ‘Create account’ in the homepage’s top right. After that, I have entered all the necessary personal information, including my preferable username and a strong 10-digit alphanumeric password, and clicked the "Create your account" tab to create an account on Wikipedia. From this, I have learned how to create a personal account on a digital platform to interact with people across the world through data and information.

68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:19, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:32, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:36, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Tzc0725 This is now fine. Current with Week 1. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Cecilia haha
1. I added the legend story on the Chinese New Year's red envelopes section to make the origination clearer and more attractive.

2. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1052587919&oldid=1052491602

3. I think it is essential to keep the information comprehensive. I believe the professionalism of the article and citation are equally important. Citation can prevent plagiarism. If people are interested in a relevant article, they can check the reference and do more readings. --Cecilia haha (talk) 01:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE" as this source does not seem credible to me. However, another editor has already gone in and edited this one so I will leave it for now. Please focus on more credible sources in the future. Ok for now for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:05, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Thank you! I will be more careful about the article authority. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cecilia haha (talk • contribs) 16:53, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3/Assignment3/Jw6740
1. The article I assigned is Targeted advertising since I am interested in marketing strategies that can effectively attract more customers. The link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Targeted_advertising/Bibliography

2. Here is the link to the diff I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Targeted_advertising&diff=prev&oldid=1052697316

3. From this assignment, I learned how the wiki article can be edited and contributed by the wiki users. This is my first time editing the wiki and I corrected some grammar and word spelling issues for the article. I am looking forward to editing more in the future. Jw6740 (talk) 17:12, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 22:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4/Assignment4/Jw6740
1. The article I assigned is "domestic trades". The article is short and only has two references. Therefore, I added a reference with a sentence under the "importance and Role" section to state one of the benefits that domestic trades have compared to international trades.

2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Domestic_trade&diff=prev&oldid=1052715166

The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Domestic_trade/Bibliography

3. What I learned from this assignment is how to add or reuse a citation in the wiki articles, and how we can add the reference and the templates at the end of the article. Besides, I also learned the article on the wiki may be lack supportive references and can be improved as well. Jw6740 (talk) 18:41, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 22:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

week3/assignment 3/ Amber MWY
1. This is my added article: New energy vehicles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_energy_vehicles_in_China. I added the article brief and three citations. 2. There are two links about the bibliography and article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China/Bibliography 3. It is a very interesting thing to read an article and edit it. I learned about the importance of citation and a clear brief. It can show the summary of the article to the reader very clearly and necessarily.--Amber MWY (talk) 07:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Amber MWY Please remove the odd formatting around your links and have them within the text and not starting on a new line. Please fix that and ping me again here and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:08, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT sure, I did it. Does it good? Thank you!--Amber MWY (talk) 09:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , All fine. Next, please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:03, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

week4/assignment 4/ Amber MWY
1. I assigned an article"Environmental impacts of lithium-ion batteries" and I added a citation to support the "This type of battery is also referred to as lithium-ion batteries. " 2. a link to the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries&type=revision&diff=1052829465&oldid=1052659979. This is a link for the bibliography https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries/Bibliography 3. when we write an article, we can not write an extreme sentence. we need to give evidence to support it.--Amber MWY (talk) 09:57, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3/ Assignment 3/ Beccabubu
1. The article I chose to edit is "Meituan(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meituan)", it is cheaper to have food delivered than to get it yourself, in China Meituan is an APP known for food delivery service. Personally, I order two or three meals in Meituan a week. So I really want to know more about this app.

2. There are a few grammar mistakes in this article so I made some adjustments. Besides, to generate rich content, I add a section called "Main assets" of Meituan to make the whole content more informative. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1052835986&oldid=1049221122

3. Though all the source of knowledge and information shared on Wikipedia is not true, but if you try to identify content gaps and tell what is wrong and right, you can easily make a difference. --Beccabubu (talk) 11:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nicely done. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 17:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4/ Assignment 4/ Beccabubu
1. The article I chose to add the citation is "Tongling" (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tongling). Tongling is the city where I was born, it is a small city in China that barely has any information to introduce it on Wikipedia. So I add the citation of the definition from Encyclopædia Britannica.

2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tongling&diff=1052843263&oldid=1051101012

3. Citation is extremely important, a proper citation will allow a reader go back and refer to the original source as they deem appropriate. --Beccabubu (talk) 12:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , You used an encyclopedia article for the source, which is really not the highest level. Next time, please use a higher-quality source. OK for now, so Week 4 is current. FULBERT (talk) 17:10, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2/ Assignment2/ Cloi929
As Covid-19 spreads across the United States, the number and duration of school closures increase. Children from families that depend on school food, may be further disadvantaged by insufficient nutrition. And I learned, even short-term food insecurity can lead to long-term developmental, psychological, physical, and emotional damage.Cloi929 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

1.https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/nejmp2005638 2.Child hunger has been one of the major health problems in various parts of the world. With the emergence of the Covid-19 pandemic, the problem increased severity as more members of the society suffered the blow. My initial impression of this article is that the pandemic is a very uncertain factor. When schools are closed, children will miss at least $30 worth of food services every week. This has a long-term effect on their health. 3.This article was published in a medical academic journal. It is authoritative and credible. I think everything is related to the topic of the article. The tone is neutral. The citations are all valid. I think there will be some lag in information. It is mentioned in the article that all schools are closed and students will not receive school food subsidies. The current situation is that most schools are back to normal, and students can eat at school. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cloi929/Evaluate_an_Article--Cloi929 (talk) 01:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is now fine, though please do this as a reply to me after my comment. OK for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Gdaymate011
Hello, this is Kai Wu's fourth Assignment Report.

1. The article I assigned to the weekly assignment is about my hometown "Qingdao City", this is the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qingdao. The citation I made is about the Qingdao University ranking detail because I think the university of each city can represent the culture of a city. therefore, I would like to make some contribution to this article.

2. This is the link to my diff of what I have edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Qingdao&type=revision&diff=1052771893&oldid=1051581128

3. What I learned from this assignment is the use of citation is to enrich the content of the article and make it more credible. Gdaymate011 (talk) 01:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / assignment 4/ Jjjjdddd199704
1. I cite a description of his wealth, and his main wealth accumulation industry from the forbe website on the Zhong Shanshan wiki profile.

2. This is the link to the citation difference I added. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zhong_Shanshan&diff=1052549943&oldid=1052549664

3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance persuasiveness and let us understand a person more comprehensively.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)


 * ,Dear professor I assigned the article already nowJjjjdddd199704 (talk) 01:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. OK for this time. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Sleep by 11
I am writing the word of this company Tencent, and the citation I added is the address of this company's official website.

With this link below, you can see my writing history, as well as the individual versions. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Sleep_by_11/Tencent&action=history

This week I learned how to peer review someone else's article, which requires a rigorous and detailed process to evaluate all aspects. In addition to this, I also learned how to write my own words, such as how to post my own text, how to edit content inside the sandbox, and how to add citations.I deeply understood that the process of writing Wikipedia is very rigorous and how to write academic articles with the same rigor. It is also important to be responsible for every single word you write.Sleep by 11 (talk) 01:22, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , You did something that appeared more like writing a new article rather than editing the article as was the assignment. Please review the assignment and add a citation to the article you chose exactly as per the assignment. Whatever you actually did was deleted, per an editor's comment on your Talk page. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 17:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Sleep by 11
This week I learned how to evaluate an article and some tools for editing Wikipedia text, including how to use the whole interface, etc. I have discovered that Wikipedia is a powerful tool that allows us to edit the encyclopedia objectively. The system has set up is very good and therefore gives us, the editors, a good sense of independence and objectivity.Sleep by 11 (talk) 15:58, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Sleep by 11 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is the last opportunity to fix this for this week's assignment. FULBERT (talk) 17:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1 / Baezoey
Hello everyone! This is Baezoey! It is my first time creating a Wikipedia account and learn how to edit articles. There are some many instructions there and I am trying to follow all of them. Hope my editing can help others to better knowing something finallyBaezoey (talk) 02:46, 31 October 2021 (UTC).
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this an interesting and engaging experience! FULBERT (talk) 17:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Baezoey
I chosed an article from my interested area, which is eSports, to evaluate. For my evaluation, I found that this article is not up to date, and it only shows content till 2019. I also noticed that this article cited many content from the social media account.

Here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baezoey/Evaluate_an_Article

I learned that even Wikipedia, the largest encyclopedia website, has content that is not updated in time. As users of Wikipedia, we should not only be recipients, but also editors.Baezoey (talk) 06:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice evaluation overall. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:54, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Baezoey
1. Uzi is one of my favorite professional eSports player of League of Legends. He officially retired from professional play in 2020 so I add a citation for the date he announced his retirement. The source I use is ESPN, which is a famous multinational sports channel in America. Link to article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uzi_(gamer)

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uzi_(gamer)&diff=1052821638&oldid=1049552180

3. Citation is the best way for people interested in the content of a Wikipedia article and wants to go deeper into it. It also proves that what we added to the article is backed by reliable sources instead of something we come up with by ourselves.Baezoey (talk) 08:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

week 3/Assignment 3/Chenjshi
Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi(Yuqiong), 1. The article I copyedited is "Datong". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datong 2. I modified the usage of some punctuation and words. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Datong&type=revision&diff=1052810290&oldid=1045272826 3. I modified the usage of some punctuation marks and words, which is more helpful for people to understand the article. Datong is my hometown. I hope that more and more people will know about this city and improve the content of Wikipedia. Everyone will make some positive changes to the article, which will make the content of Wikipedia more and more reliable.Chenjshi (talk) 06:19, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi
 * , Nice edit overall. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 17:58, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/Assignment 4/Chenjshi
1. I added a citation about the history of bed bath&beyond. It provides us with more information about bed bath&beyond so that we can clearly understand the achievements of bed bath&beyond.

2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bed_Bath_%26_Beyond&type=revision&diff=1052838003&oldid=1052837431

3. From this task, I learned how to use citations. Using citations can make the article more authentic. At the same time, the correct use of citations can also make the article more convincing.Chenjshi (talk) 09:28, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit with a credible source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week1 / Assignment1 / Damonmand
Hi, everyone, it is my first time to use wikipedia, and I learn a lot from how to use the sandbox and check the watchlist. I am so exciting to work with my classmate here. Damonmand (talk) 04:14, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find editing engaging and an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 18:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2 / Assignment2 / Damonmand
1. Hello guys, here is Zaimeng's second post. The article that I pick is "League of Legends Pro League" and it is currently a level C article so it has a lot of improvement space. Since esport is the new industry, the information about it still lacking a lot. This article did not mention the relationship between the leagues from all over the world. Also the citation still need to be added more.

2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Damonmand/Evaluate_an_Article?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article

3. I learned that even in Wikipedia, many articles still need to be keep evaluated even it already be posted. People who read these articles will get more completely information.Damonmand (talk) 06:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , You evaluation is a little short, but good enough for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3 / Assignment3 / Damonmand
Hi, guys, this is the third post for Zaimeng Xiao.

1: The article I copyedited is "The International 2019". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_International_2019

2: I have some regarding a sentence in the article to help it easier to understanded. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_International_2019&type=revision&diff=1052817359&oldid=1051555243

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I am a fan of Dota2, The International 2019 is an annual Dota 2 world championship esports tournament and I was watching all the competitions at that year.Damonmand (talk) 07:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice initial copyediting. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / Assignment4 / Damonmand
1. Shantou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for the news about they stop the traditional newspaper and transfer to e-newspaper. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shantou&type=revision&diff=1052822316&oldid=1052432426 3. I learn that add citation is very hard, since wikipedia is been very completely, it takes time to check what it has missed and takes time to search sources.Damonmand (talk) 08:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice learning on this one. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260
Hello folks,

Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article.

I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link to the article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menuEricaLiu1260 (talk) 23:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This has still not been complete. Please finish before the end of the day today. FULBERT (talk) 18:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260
Hello folks, Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article. I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link of evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EricaLiu1260/Evaluate_an_Article This is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menu ～～～
 * Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / EricaLiu1260
1.My Copyedit article is "KFC in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KFC_in_China

2.A certain product on the menu in this article has been removed, so I will make a note later in order to make the article more accurate. At the same time, the Chinese name of some dishes is incorrect, so I corrected it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=KFC_in_China&type=revision&diff=1052826580&oldid=1052151068

3. At the beginning I was very nervous to edit that. I found out the exact name of the product and the news that it has been removed by consulting the official website of KF China. This can make this topic more accurate. EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice copyediting of this article. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4 / Assignment 4 / EricaLiu1260
1. My citation article is "Fast food in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fast_food_in_China

2. The article mentioned that the amount of instant noodles consumed by the Chinese is huge, but the fact is that the consumption of instant noodles in China is gradually decreasing due to the popularity of takeaway. In order for everyone to understand this issue more objectively and accurately, I think I need to add some quotations. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fast_food_in_China&type=revision&diff=1052829068&oldid=1034021906

3. This is the link to my citation:https://asia.nikkei.com/Business/Food-Beverage/Chinese-consumers-shift-from-instant-noodles-to-soft-drinks EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice citation used. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week1 / Assignment 1 / Herry3999
Hi, I am Haoran Lin. This is my first time to edit Wikipedia. I hope I can learn a lot in Wikipedia. Herry3999 (talk) 16:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please edit this and use your Wikipedia User Name in the heading, per the assignment naming requirement for "week / assignment / and your Wikipedia name" - ping me here when you are done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:36, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * OK, I have changed it. Herry3999 (talk) 03:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is now complete. Welcome to Wikipedia! Week 1 is current. FULBERT (talk) 18:14, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Second Post / Herry3999
1.This is an article about MACD indicators in stocks. This paper introduces the mathematical interpretation and transaction application of MACD. I put forward some areas for improvement. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Herry3999/Evaluate_an_Article?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article 3.In this process, I learned that writing an article may have to consider a lot of things, especially explaining the type of article. Because you don't know your readers, you'd better do everything so that readers don't have questions when reading. Herry3999 (talk) 08:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:20, 30 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi, I have already added my first post as the name of week1/Assignment 1/hl3999. Herry3999 (talk) 16:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , I somehow cannot locate it; can you please link to it? FULBERT (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Herry3999
1. My copyedited article is the "Hui Ka Yan".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Career 2. I added a record of his personal life. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&type=revision&diff=1052636906&oldid=1049541217 3. In this process, I experienced the process of modifying Wikipedia by querying information for the first time. This made me feel very interesting, but also gave me a deeper understanding of Hui Ka Yan. Herry3999 (talk) 08:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / assignment 4/ Herry3999
1. I chose the article about Wang Jianlin this week. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Early_life_and_career 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&type=revision&diff=1052795506&oldid=1041607938

3. In this process, I learned that every example should be proved accordingly. This can reflect the integrity and preciseness of the article. Herry3999 (talk) 09:13, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Finally, Week 4 has to be a different article from Week 3 per the assignment, so please assign yourself another article, edit it, and then post that assignment. Then ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:23, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I have chosen a new article. Herry3999 (talk) 03:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/Katxzhang
Hi everyone this is Katherine Zhang, I just realized I skipped the first post. I am very interested in this project as Wikipedia is one of the most powerful and comprehensive searching engines in the world. I am glad that I am given the chance to contribute to enriching its information coverage that might help later people in the future.Katxzhang (talk) 13:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 18:17, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2/ Assignment 2/ hl4288 RickyLiao
1. The article I chose is "Uzi (gamer)". The reason I chose him is that he is my favorite e-sports player. This article is currently at the start-class level, which means there is a lot of room for improvement. This article does not detail the heroes Uzi is good at and the winning percentage of each hero. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RickyLiao1997/Evaluate_an_Article 3. Before this learning process, I thought that many Wikipedia articles were authoritative and complete. Now I realize that there are actually many articles that have shortcomings that can be improved and improved. More importantly, I learned how to evaluate an article from multiple angles and learned the necessary factors for a good article.
 * RickyLiao1997 Please remove the odd formatting around your signatuve. The easiest way is to delete that portion of the code that is not correct and then without skipping a line sign your post again using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Dear Professor, I have deleted the odd formatting, please take a look at it, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is fine now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:20, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3/ Assignment 3/ hl4288 RickyLiao
Hi, this is Ricky.

1: The article I copyedited is "Yoga Lin". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoga_Lin 2: I found that the article did not cover Yoga’s personal life experience, especially the important information about his marriage, and there are also missing pieces in the single. So I included this information in the article. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yoga_Lin&type=revision&diff=1052635772&oldid=1045410072 3: I found that editing these contents is a particularly interesting thing, after successful editing, there will be a unique sense of accomplishment. And I can see other people's edits from the historical editors, compare them, and see the development process of the entire article in more detail. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 08:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Dear Professor,I have already assigned myself this arrticle in Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , I would have reverted your edits as you made them without any evidence cited to support your claims. However, given another editor improved upon it already, I will leave it as is since others thought it was ok. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:21, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week4/ Assignment 4/ hl4288 RickyLiao
1. This week I added a citation on the article about the movie called "you are the apple of my eye". https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye. The soundtrack of this movie lack a citation, so I add a citation to it.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye&type=revision&diff=1052639935&oldid=1040961272

3. In this week's study, I realized that the details of the article need to be carefully noted. Sometimes the lack of citations will make the article lack authenticity and reliability. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 09:15, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Dear Professor, I have already assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit overall. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ TFMonk19970531
The article I found needs to be updated is Atua(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atua). The article is rated stub and I found this article needs expansion both in content and structure. Each god can be explained more with research. Besides that, citations could be better developed and need to be more reliable. Basically everything could to be better. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 14:11, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 01:25, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor I have assigned myself an article. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 12:46, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply
 * FULBERT Got it! --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Where is the link to your article evaluation per the assignment? Please reply to me here with it and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ TFMonk19970531
1. This article a Chinese Basketball Association (CBA) team Shanghai Sharks. Briefly explained what the team did throughout the years. However I found somebody has added some facts that are not true to this article and I decide to delete that. before the edit, the article states that " In 2021, point guard Alex Fisher had 69 points in a regular season game against the Beijing Ducks". In fact Alex Fisher is a football player. The article also mentions that Ben Simmons is belonged to the team, which is not true. Ben Simmons is a NBA player currently playing in Philadelphia 76ERS.

2.Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shanghai_Sharks

3. I have learned that some people may take advantage of Wikipedia to edit something that is not true, which may make others believe the fact. I help others not see fake information in the article --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 05:39, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * TFMonk19970531 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ TFMonk19970531
1. The article I edited is Ben Simmons. It briefly explained Ben's career from his childhood to right now. The content gap I found is that the article does not follow up the conflict between him and Philadelphia 76ers. Due to the conflict with the team Ben refused to play for the team, which made the team to fine him each game. The citation I found report that 76ers has stopped fining Ben, which is not updated in the article.

2. the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ben_Simmons&type=revision&diff=1052448320&oldid=1052196877

3. This week I have learned about Plagiarism and the importance to keep updating the article constantly so readers can get more information. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * TFMonk19970531 Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * TFMonk19970531 Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Tzc0725
Tzc0725 (talk) 22:37, 26 October 2021 (UTC) How to evaluate a Wikipedia article

For evaluating the quality of a Wikipedia article, the text and references used in the article, the talk page of the article, and the history covering page editing are required to be focused.

How to edit a Wikipedia article

For editing a Wikipedia article first step is to look for the edit link which is provided on the right side of every section of the article and then click on the next to the paragraph to revise.

Selected article to evaluate

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_shopping

Evaluation of the above-selected article

The text used in the Wikipedia article on Online Shopping is easy to understand and grammatically correct, and a lot of references are used therein which are accessible. The talk page of the article provides spaces for editors to discuss the required changes in the article and also, the article is not edited many times which makes it a good article. Though, the article needs to include some more real-life examples of online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic.

What I Did and What I Learned	

I have selected a Wikipedia article on Online Shopping and evaluated it by considering the text and references it used, its talk page, and history showing the number of edits made on this article. There was no such real-life example of online shopping in the selected article and thus, I have added some real-life examples on online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic to the selected article. I have learned about the areas to consider while evaluating a Wikipedia article.


 * Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:29, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Week 2 is ok. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:30, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Tzc0725
Tzc0725 (talk) 22:41, 26 October 2021 (UTC) The Finalised Topic:

Consumer Behavior

Copyedit the selected article

In order to copyedit an article, the first step is to fix the punctuations and remove any kind of typo in the article. After that, the article needs to be scanned for finding out the errors of the ways by which the article needs to be improved.

What I Did and What I Learned

The Wikipedia article I have selected for copyediting is on Consumer behavior https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consumer_behaviour). . The previous Wikipedia article is on Online Shopping and the current one is on Consumer Behaviour, both rely on each other as online shopping is a modern behavior of consumers related to shop things they need. Further, the difference between the previous week's version and the current one is that the previous version includes an evaluation of a Wikipedia article and the current one covers copyediting of a Wikipedia article. From this week, I have learned about the way to copyedit a Wikipedia article.

Link to the diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Consumer_behaviour&diff=prev&oldid=1052751826 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Link to the talk page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Consumer_behaviour#Consumer_Influence_in_Society

68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:23, 28 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)


 * FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Week 3 is now current. --FULBERT (talk) 18:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Tzc0725
Gap identification

The key gap between the article on Online Shopping, and the article on Consumer Behaviour is that there is no such clear discussion on the impact of consumer behavior on online shopping in the article on Online Shopping, whereas the article on Consumer Behaviour includes the behaviors of consumers that influence online shopping. The advantages and disadvantages of online purchase are provided in the article on Online Shopping, but the advantages and disadvantages of consumer behavior are not provided in the article on Consumer Behaviour.

Plagiarism training

Plagiarism is to present someone else's ideas or work as your own, without or with his/her consent, by using or incorporating such work or ideas into personal work without providing full acknowledgment (Oxford Students, 2021). It is considered unethical because it is a form of theft.

Citation of article

The article to edit here is on Healthcare Industry. Citation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Healthcare_industry.

The article to cite is here: https://www.cms.gov/Research-Statistics-Data-and-Systems/Statistics-Trends-and-Reports/NationalHealthExpendData/NationalHealthAccountsHistorical

What I Did and What I Learned

Summary of the cited article:

The Healthcare industry is the integration and aggregation of different economic sectors within a system that delivers products and services for treating patients by different types of care. This industry is contributing around 10% to the most developed nation’s GDP and is the largest and fastest-growing industry in the world. There are several areas of the healthcare industry such as hospital activities, dental and medical practice activities, and other activities related to human health. The healthcare professionals and providers who are engaged in providing preventive, curative, rehabilitative, palliative, and promotional care services systematically way to individuals, families, or communities. This industry delivers primary care, secondary care, and healthcare services at tertiary levels. Beveridge model, Bismarck model, National health insurance model, and Out-of-pocket model are the models that relate to the healthcare industry. Healthcare spending in the U.S. grew 4.6 percent in 2019, reaching $3.8 trillion or $11,582 per person. As a share of the nation's Gross Domestic Product, health spending accounted for 17.7 percent.

Link to the sandbox page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tzc0725/Healthcare_industry

Link to the diff of article citation added

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Healthcare_industry&diff=prev&oldid=1052405609

Things I have learned

From this week, I have learned about the concept of Plagiarism and how consumers' online shopping behaviors impact the healthcare industries of developing nations. Tzc0725 (talk) 00:28, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERT Okay. I've just done it. Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is fine now. Seems interesting how some edits done right after yours were then reverted back to your edit itself. Nice job! FULBERT (talk) 18:34, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1 / First Post/ Wikisun1952
Hi, this is Jieni. It is my pleasure to meet you guys. This is my first time editing Wikipedia. Wikisun1952 (talk) 05:45, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Welcome to Wikipedia! Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week (including the training) and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply.
 * Hi Professor, I have finished all the assignments for week one. Thank you. User:FULBERT Wikisun1952 (talk) 01:06, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Nicely done. Current with Week 1. --FULBERT (talk) 18:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / Wikisun1952
Hello, I hope you are all doing well, this is Jieni Zha's report for the week 2 assignment. This article I assigned to myself is related to the cosmetic industry. It's a class C level article so there is plenty of room for improvement. For this article, I found that it has a daily average of 127 views. There are some issues of the content are lack of evidence and support. This article studies the business model and sales of cosmetics in many countries, but it is not comprehensive. The analysis of the Chinese market and the Japanese market is not comprehensive. This paper should analyze the sales and product quality of cosmetics in these countries.

This is the link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmetic_industry

This is the link to my evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Evaluate_an_ArticleWikisun1952 (talk) 23:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nicely done. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / Wikisun1952
Hello, this is Jieni Zha's third assignment

1. My copyedited article is "Broadcasting". This is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broadcasting

2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Broadcasting&type=revision&diff=1052767681&oldid=1049623188

3: The reason why I do this is that I like to watch live broadcasts when I rest. I have a lot of knowledge about live broadcasts. I have a deep research on the live broadcast content, mode, and platform. After reading this article, I think some points are not enough, so I added some content to the article.

4: The link for the article "Broadcasting" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Broadcasting/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliographyWikisun1952 (talk) 00:24, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is ok for now, though next time you add content please be sure to cite a source for it. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)