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Week 4 / Assignment 4 / Wikisun1952
Hello, this is Jieni Zha.

1. The article I assigned is "E-commerce". This article does not give a comprehensive introduction to the types of e-commerce, so I added content to the article. It’s located under the section of “E-commerce businesses may also employ some or all of the following”.

2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=E-commerce&type=revision&diff=1052772726&oldid=1052303451 The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/E-commerce/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography

3. From this assignment, I learned how to add citations to Wikipedia and how to correctly find out the reference used in the article. I also learned how to generate citations in WikipediaWikisun1952 (talk) 00:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is also ok for now, though I would have ordinarily reverted it as not being a high enough quality credible source. OK for now, however. Week 4 is done. FULBERT (talk) 18:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/Assignment 3/ Katxzhang
1. The link of the article I copyedited is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_influence_bias

2. The link to the comparison between old and new of the article is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Social_influence_bias&type=revision&diff=1052812403&oldid=952213718

3. I have learned a lot in this week's work, one of them is that precise punctuation contributes to the composition of a well-written article, it is a factor that can be easily neglected by writers; The accuracy of punctuation can make sure viewers receive information efficiently. I have also learned that prepositions in phrases are able to alter the interpretation of the phrase, therefore, writers should be cautious with their wording. Katxzhang (talk) 09:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great! Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/Assignment 4/Katxzhang
1. The article citation I added is a brief summary of BuzzFeed's operating model, the way it makes a profit and keeps on growing its business scale.

2. The link of comparison is: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=BuzzFeed&diff=prev&oldid=1052850965

3. During the process, I learned that it is challenging to write with precision while trying to be concise, therefore, massive research in regard to the topic is of vital importance in order to accumulate more insight that eventually contributes to shaping our words effectively. Katxzhang (talk) 13:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/Katxzhang/Assignment 2
Hello this is Katherine,

1. The article I assigned is "Taiyuan", the link is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taiyuan. 2. I think this article can be improved by including more detailed information on "Food" section as well as a comprehensive description of the city's present development. 3. The link of my evaluation is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Katxzhang/Evaluate_an_Article. Katxzhang (talk) 05:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Katxzhang
 * , Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi Professor, I have just assigned the article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Fine. Now current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Jason Zhou Week 1/Assignment 1/ Zhouyu2428
Hi this is my first wikipedia editing --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 19:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this an exciting and engaging opportunity!. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:30, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/Assignment 2/KwokHy98
1. This article is outdated and more evidence and explanation is needed. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KwokHy98/Evaluate_an_Article 3. In week 2, I learned what makes an article good. It should have a good structure, a neutral tone, up-to-date content, and reliable references. KwokHy98 (talk) 19:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Fine. Current. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:30, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

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Jason Zhou Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Zhouyu2428
1. For week 2 assignment, I evaluated an article on the topic of ecosystem. What I have found is that although the organization of the article is concise and accurate and the sources are all reliable, there is a lack of information on this article because it is very short and not many concurrent examples and concepts are on it. 2. Link to the evaluated article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_ecosystem#See_also 3. I have learned how to evaluate a wikipedia article through this process. The evaluation should be thorough and detailed. --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 20:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please share a link to your review, which should be created automatically as a template page. Review the training for the link to create this. Ping me on my Talk page when done and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:30, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ KwokHy98
1. Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joey_Yung 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joey_Yung&type=revision&diff=1052914278&oldid=1052541733 3. In assignment 3 I learn that we need to be careful of grammar and word using when we editing an article in Wikipedia. We should make the article clear and easy to read. KwokHy98 (talk) 20:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * This is current for Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:33, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Crazytoppp
Hello everyone, this is Mengfei Han, It is the first time I edit in Wikipidia. I am glad to talk with everyone here!Crazytoppp (talk) 21:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Also, please revise the heading as this should be for assignment one. -- FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Crazytoppp
1. The article I evaluated is "Video game addiction". The answer to this article is rigorous and neutral, and there is no biased toward a particular position. The article’s explanation of the topic is very accurate and clear. At the same time, a large amount of academic research is used to prove the credibility. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crazytoppp/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_article 3. In the process of evaluating this article, I learned how to analyze the credibility of the article and how to add citations in wikipedia. ---Crazytoppp (talk) 22:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Please fix what I asked you to fix for Week 1 and then I will review this. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Baezoey
1. The article I worked on: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doinb

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Doinb&diff=1052817209&oldid=1050478402

3.I learned that not everything on Wikipedia is correct. We should always be critical of what we acquire from Wikipedia, whether as an editor or receivers. The magical power of editing those articles is that I can see my adjustments on the website right after publishing changes.Baezoey (talk) 07:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is ok for now, though next time be sure to add a citation to the article to support your claim. FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , Hi Professor. Is that mean I am current for this week?
 * Yes, current for Week 3. --FULBERT (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2 / Assignment 2/yf2196
Hope you all are doing well this week. This is YiFan Feng assignment for week 2. This should be my homework for the second week. I don't know why I couldn't find my homework for the previous two times. This is the article I found about brunch. It says British brunch is around eleven o 'clock, and I don't think there's a standard time for brunch.

This assignment is based on the evaluation of Wikipedia, and I have learned a lot in the process of finding and evaluating Wikipedia. I hope I can continue to learn about Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brunch&action=edit&section=3


 * Yifannn Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

What is using four ～～～～ for tilde？ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yifannn (talk • contribs) 06:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Yifannn When you use ~ at the end of your post it automatically signs your posts. Please use this as a reply and see / edit your other assignments for Weeks 1-3 as they are not yet complete. Please make sure to also assign yourself your articles, and have this along with Week 4 complete by tomorrow. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

I have assigned my own article.... Yifannn (talk) 19:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Yifannn You must assign your own articles in the Wiki Education dashboard, at the top of [|the dashboard home page]. Please do this and then ping me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 23:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

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Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Cecilia haha
1.This time I edited the Chinese section of Impact of the COVID-19 Pandemic on the Food Industry. I added a paragraph after the original text about the percentage change of consumers' shopping methods during the epidemic to illustrate the impact on the food industry.

2. The difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_the_food_industry&type=revision&diff=1053954455&oldid=1050171508

3.Editing topics related to my research paper can help me deepen my understanding of relevant aspects and help others supplement what I know. I think this is a win-win way, but the article must be authoritative.--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:41, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current for Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 12:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Gdaymate011
Greetings

1. I hope you are all doing well, the article I picked for my assignment is about the Qing Dynasty. The citation I have added is about the Taiping Rebellion, which is an important historical event in the Qing Dynasty. this citation provided a detailed background to this period of history.

2. This is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Qing_dynasty&type=revision&diff=1053961096&oldid=1053707252

3. Through this assignment process, I learned how to make an article more detailed by adding citations. A good citation is very important to the credibility of an article.Gdaymate011 (talk) 05:15, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is ok for now, though please use a higher-level source, such as ones you would use for our course, for future edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 12:47, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Week5/ Assignment 5/ Beccabubu
1. I've been using my new MacBook Air M1 for almost a month. The price and performance of Apple Silicon are excellent, so I'm really curious about the ARM architecture, specifically the new Apple M1 chip. So this week, I kept exploring the fun of editing Wikipedia as an editor and chose the article "Apple M1". I added a paragraph of the development path of Apple M1, and the original source comes from Apple's official web.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Apple_M1&diff=1053966646&oldid=1053741141

3. The whole process of editing and adding content to Wikipedia enriches my knowledge, and knowledge sharing is made easy by Wikipedia, and this noble deed motivates people to contribute. --Beccabubu (talk) 06:41, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit overall, though as another editor pointed out you made a claim without a citation. However, other editors did add that and improve upon it, and that is how the editing process works! Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 12:50, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ TFMonk19970531
1. I have always been a huge Pokémon fan and I have been waiting for the next generation game for a long time. So I decided to browse about some update information about this new Pokémon game: Pokémon Legends: Arceus. On the Wiki page I found that it does not include some exciting features about this game, which is that some Pokémon have brand new appearance that we've never seen before. So I added some information about that and hope to share with others.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pok%C3%A9mon_Legends%3A_Arceus&type=revision&diff=1053993649&oldid=1053546055

3. The process of editing and publish my changes invisibly awakened my sense of responsibility and I feel like I have the duty to make sure others can see latest and authentic information. The process is really interesting. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 11:53, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice edit, though please make sure you use a credible enough source. This is especially the case when companies provide information about themselves. Current for Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 12:53, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Week5/Assignment5/Jw6740
1. I found an article related to women study named "Feminist movement". The article has little information under the section of the businesses and the information author provided is not current. Therefore, I added two sentences and a reference to give more description about the feminist business in the current marketplace.

2. The link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Feminist_movement&diff=prev&oldid=1054020920

3. What I learned from this exercise is that the articles on the wiki should be reviewed by more users, in that, the articles can be more accurate and can prevent users from getting incorrect information about specific areas through searching on Wikipedia. Jw6740 (talk) 16:05, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit and citation added. Current for Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 12:56, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/Huilin826
The article I found related to the Chinese New Year because I am so happy to know more detailed information about the Chinese New Year, It is a traditional festival in China. People will use different approaches to celebrate it, such as Chun Lian, and Ya Sui Qian. This is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_New_Year This is a diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1054032470&oldid=1054031649#movedpara_3_1_rhsHuilin826 (talk) 17:25, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , I saw your edit was removed as another editor commented it was already present. OK for now, though please use a higher-level source for your edits in the future, similar to those we use for our course. Week 4 is current. FULBERT (talk) 12:59, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Wikidata weekly summary #493
Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week. 


 * Events
 * Upcoming
 * Live about SPARQL queries on Twitch and in French, by Vigneron, November 9 at 18:00 CET
 * LIVE Wikidata editing #61 - YouTube, Facebook, November 13 at 19:00 UTC
 * Online Wikidata meetup in Swedish #86, November 14 at 13.00 UTC
 * Wikidata webinar at the Goethe Institute in Athens (Greek). Nov 8, 2021 17:00 UTC+1
 * Next installment of the LD4 Wikibase Working Hour! Monday 15 November 2021, 3PM - 4PM Eastern (Time zone converter). Registration: Zoom registration link
 * Ongoing
 * Weekly Lexemes Challenge #15, COP26 (2/2)
 * Past
 * Documentation of the WikidataCon 2021 sessions are currently ongoing. It may take a few weeks to publish all 80 hours of content but you can already watch some of them (from each session's Etherpad)
 * Wikidata SPARQL tutorial around the Saint-Brieuc museum (in French)


 * Press, articles, blog posts, videos
 * Media
 * User:Theklan at : Wikidata: una base de datos editable, multilingüe, libre y con datos de todo conocimiento (Spanish)
 * Blogs
 * TIB at WikidataCon: Part 1, Part 2
 * With help of their prof, U of T students go from being Wikidata novices to international conference presenters
 * Crowdsourcing the Scene at the Boston Rock City Edit-a-Thon
 * Videos
 * Basic tutorial on how to improve Wikidata items (in Italian) - YouTube
 * Metadata of cultural institutes: import strategies on Wikidata in the case of the Tuscany Region (in Italian) - YouTube
 * Wikidata for 5-star Linked Open Databases: a case study of PanglaoDB - YouTube
 * Using Wikidata entities and properties in schema.org markup and linked data - YouTube


 * Tool of the week
 * are occupation labels gender neutral? a tool to explore gender neutrality of labels in different languages.
 * RAWGraphs, a dataviz tool which allows SPARQL queries (source)


 * Other Noteworthy Stuff
 * New strategies for Wikidata and the Wikibase Ecosystem published and waiting for your feedback. Add your comments!
 * OpenRefine 3.5.0 was released


 * Did you know?


 * Newest properties:
 * General datatypes: Museu da Pessoa History, Conway polyhedron notation
 * External identifiers: Tennis Abstract player ID, Women in the Legislature ID, StopGame ID, Enciclopedia di Roma person ID, Biografija.ru ID, Derrieux agency person ID, Kola Encyclopedia ID, Penza Encyclopedia ID, Enciclopedia della Scienza e della Tecnica ID, Musées Nationaux Recuperation ID, Lithuanian Heritage Registry code, Nynorskordboka-ID, Bokmålsordboka-ID, Indonesian parliament candidate ID 2019, Trove work ID, Vokrug.tv show ID, Apple maps ID, Federation Council person ID, Meetup group id, Glitchwave genre ID


 * New property proposals to review:
 * General datatypes: original catalog description, Kanobu ID, Yandex.Question person ID, 発車メロディ
 * External identifiers: Listen Notes podcast ID, WhatsApp number, CNKI Journal ID, Baidu Scholar Journal ID, AllHomes research location ID, Domain suburb profile ID, Coles Online product ID, Woolworths product ID, Maritime Business Directory ID, Oslo Byleksikon ID, NVE Bre ID, Databáze-her.cz ID, FederalPress Encyclopedia ID, babesdirectory, DHAC ID, Naver TV ID, IJF competition ID, JudoInside competition ID, live.ijf competition ID, FAOLEX No, EJU competition ID, The-Sports.org competition ID, StarHit ID, Nasha Versia ID, LocalWiki ID, ESPN MMA fighter ID, Comparably company ID, Spanish Cultural Heritage thesauri ID, Dr. Duke's Phytochemical and Ethnobotanical Databases Chemical ID


 * Query examples:
 * Number of virtual twins (pair with the same dates of birth and death) in Wikidata (source)
 * People recently buried in a cemetery nearby without an image of the grave (P1442) on Wikidata (source)
 * List of lexemes in French associated with occupation items (source)
 * Towns with less than 1000 people that have a cathedral (Source)
 * Musical works based on literary works (Source)
 * Main surnames of people born in the Puy-de-Dôme, France (Source)
 * Members of the Ukrainian national sports team (Source)


 * Development
 * Mismatch Finder: We finished adding “next steps” dialog and a “more info” dialog to tell users more about the import a mismatch was added in.
 * We had discussions about how to best make the SearchBox WVUI component for the new Vector skin work well for Wikidata (T275251)
 * We have put a version of WBStack on wikibase.dev. We will start work to deploy to wikibase.cloud in the coming weeks.

You can see all open tickets related to Wikidata here. If you want to help, you can also have a look at the tasks needing a volunteer.


 * Monthly Tasks
 * Add labels, in your own language(s), for the new properties listed above.
 * Comment on property proposals: all open proposals
 * Contribute to a Showcase item.
 * Help translate or proofread the interface and documentation pages, in your own language!
 * Help merge identical items across Wikimedia projects.
 * Help write the next summary!

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Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Nenenie
1. I added some details and descriptions from the film because the way of telling in the novel and the film is different. At the same time, the understanding and analysis of films in the literature are increased.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=New_Year%27s_Sacrifice&type=revision&diff=1053616413&oldid=1038285598

3. Through this exercise, I found that adding some literature makes the wiki richer and more convincing, as well as fuller entries. I've found that the same story can be told differently in novels or movies. --Nenenie (talk) 23:46, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Nenenie Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 00:56, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Jjjjdddd199704
1. The article proposes the golden hall in the Great Hall of the People. I gave a specific introduction to the Golden Hall, including its structural materials, etc.

2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Great_Hall_of_the_People&diff=1053623162&oldid=1036027870

3. From this assignment, I found that adding citations or materials can enhance persuasiveness and let us understand a certain thing or story more comprehensively.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 00:44, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:58, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5 / Assignment 5 / Wikisun1952
Hi everyone, this is Jieni Zha.

1. I added some detailed content about the Chinese food industry.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fast_food_in_China&type=revision&diff=1054050452&oldid=1053538118

3. After finishing this assignment, I learned that citation is important to an article, and makes it easy for readers to understand. Wikisun1952 (talk) 19:44, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:05, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Herry3999
1. I found an article related to stock market named "How Does the Stock Market Work?". This article introduces what stocks are, how stocks are traded in the market and how stock prices are priced.

2. The link to the https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Stock_market&type=revision&diff=1054104774&oldid=1052556840

3. In this process, I learned to find articles and add references to specific topics. It not only enriched my knowledge, but also trained my ability to explore knowledge. Herry3999 (talk) 02:55, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit. Surprised it was not already present! Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:07, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Crazytoppp
1. I added China’s new regulations on online gaming bans and added citation link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Video_games_in_China 2. Link to different：https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Video_games_in_China&diff=1054116797&oldid=1047422698 3. Because everyone can edit on wikipidia, I found that some articles are accurate but lack citations. When we edit the wiki, citation and credibility are equally important Crazytoppp (talk) 04:50, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Nice edit overall, though the editor who reverted it talked about how what you added was already present in the article and in that way did not require that detail in the start of the article, called the lede. Fine overall. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:09, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Fifth Post / bl2240
Hi all 1. I was interested in the China- Africa relation article and find that there was little information on the military base of Djibouti mentioned in the article. Then I added some information about this town. 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Africa%E2%80%93China_relations&type=revision&diff=1054303283&oldid=1053943419 3. I learned that even the author is the expert on her field of study, she also need people to help her go through the article, because as human we can never do everything perfectly and Wikipedias is wonderful in letting all people to edit.--Bl2240 (talk) 07:23, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Bl2240 Nice edit. Current with Week 5. ---FULBERT (talk) 14:49, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Update from Assignment 3/ Sleep by 11
Here is the link to week 3 forum. []

Here is the diif, I fixed a typo. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sleep%20by%2011/Tencent?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sleep by 11 (talk • contribs) 13:36, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Sleep by 11 Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. Please also remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:02, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:24, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , You did not make a change to the article itself, and please do an edit to a different article than you had in Assignment 4. Reply to me here with your edit on the article itself and then I will check. Be sure any edits you make use the same level of credible evidence as we would use for our own course assignment. --- FULBERT (talk) 00:50, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Here is the link of revision history. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tencent&action=history So you can see from here that I fixed a typo.Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:19, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Great. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:55, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

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