User talk:FacultiesIntact/sandbox/Smart Grid in China

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Hi, FacultiesIntact. I saw your note on my Talk page related to this article -- I applaud your openness, and interest in keeping the NPV. I have no other comments on your changes, for two reasons: (1) My only change was to remove an irrelevant section from the original, and it appears that you've left it removed; and (2) it's not a strong area of my expertise. (I mostly learned about the subject in order to write the article at http://cacm.acm.org/news/179037-waiting-for-the-smart-grid/fulltext . --tgeller (talk) 18:08, 21 June 2015 (UTC)

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I have added talk headers, including the new paid editng template. I have also added the template to use when making "edit requests". FaculitiesIntact, you can work directly on this draft, while it is draft, but if this draft is moved to main Wikipedia space, please stop editing directly, and instead offer proposals here on the Talk page using the edit request function. Thanks.

Please also note that because you have not disclosed the client who is paying for this work, I noted that in the template above. You are currently in violation of the Terms of Use. Jytdog (talk) 00:28, 9 September 2015 (UTC)