User talk:Fadi2001

Welcome!
Hello, Fadi2001, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:58, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Steve Ramirez feedback
Hi @Fadi2001, Deantylermorris: Well done on starting the contribution for Steve Ramirez so far. I have some feedback for you as continue to develop your work.

Sources & Inline citations: Remember, everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be supported by references to reliable sources at least 3 - 5 sources that are about the topic. Currently you have no inline citations, which makes it difficult for readers to verify factual statements in your article. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.

Here are some additional reliable sources on Steve Ramirez that I encourage you use in your draft:
 * https://www.the-scientist.com/scientist-to-watch/steve-ramirez-reshapes-memories-in-the-brains-of-mice-70633
 * https://www.smithsonianmag.com/innovation/meet-two-scientists-who-implanted-false-memory-mouse-180953045/
 * https://dailyfreepress.com/2022/11/03/ramirez-lab-receives-1-15-million-grant-for-neuroscience-research/

Writing style and tone: Keep in mind, your writing for Wikipedia will summarize what other people/sources have said about a topic, so that a Wikipedia reader can get an overview of the current thoughts and understanding of that topic(in this case Steve Ramirez). The goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary of the topic at hand, not to persuade the readers on any opinion.

A good example that I like to use as reference is the Wiki article on Marsha Rhea Williams. Take a look at it for guidance on how to structure the text, header organization, and neutral writing style and tone.

If you have any questions about my feedback, feel free to reach out. Looping in Davidmpena Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:42, 30 June 2023 (UTC)