User talk:Faismoerko/SWGEmu

SWGEmu ( the Star Wars Galaxies Emulation Project ) is a project aimed to develop, maintain and expand a free C++ based Star Wars Galaxies game service. The goal of the SWGEmu Team is to provide a complete software solution that is effective and accurate in recreating the Sony Online Entertainment server daemon. SWGEmu's most important goal, however, is to bring back to life the game which the Star Wars Galaxies community grew to love with such a passion

SWGEmu ( A Star Wars Galaxies Emulation Project ) <-- its just A project, not THE ..there were or are more and its not tTHE best by defaulth, it might be but thats not the perpose of a article..

A project started x-x-xxxx aimed to develop, maintain and expand a free C++ based Star Wars Galaxies game Emulation service <--- Again its A project, and its a game emulation..

The goal of the SWGEmu Team is to provide a complete software solution that is effective and accurate in recreating the Sony Online Entertainment server daemon. SWGEmu's most important goal, however, is to bring back to life the game which -A part of the Star Wars Galaxies community grew to love with such a passion <-- Not the whole comunity.. so its A PART OF (facts vs feelings) but might wana rewrite the whole passion thing, its based on personal feelings, not facts

Made some comments, need to get this non personal,  non-the best, just plain descripion if someone who has no cleu about it,no feeling about it wrote it.

Im no good at english so cant realy help but i can filter :)

just my 2c

80.112.208.226 (talk) 10:48, 6 April 2009 (UTC)Eladi80.112.208.226 (talk) 10:48, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback. I have followed your changes about impersonality. The only thing I disagreed with was the part about it being "a star wars galaxies emulation project". Yes, it is one of multiple, however the name of the project is "The Star Wars Galaxies Emulation Project", a proper noun phrase. Therefore it requires a definite article, since it is the project's name.

Cheers 58.175.172.60 (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2009 (UTC)