User talk:Faithfocusfinish

Skyy Simmons
I saw your request on IRC but you left the channel before I could find the article at Draft:Skyy Simmons and take a look at it.

In its present state, your draft is fairly far away from an acceptable WP article. There are errors in your referencing: references should be given in-line instead of all at the bottom and I strongly prefer to see them done with citation templates like cite web instead of giving bare URLs (my preference, not absolutely required according to the rules). You can learn more about this at referencing for beginners.

Aside from the referencing errors, the draft is very poorly written. There are problems with punctuation, capitalization and abbreviations. All of these can be fixed by your fellow hardworking volunteer editors, but you should look at some articles about other football players to see how they are normally written.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 04:40, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

April 2018
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. We welcome and appreciate your contributions, but it appears you have written or added to an article about yourself, at Draft:Skyy Simmons. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). If you wish to add to an existing article about yourself, please propose the changes on its talk page. Please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. If your article has already been deleted, please see: Why was my page deleted?, and if you feel the deletion was an error, please discuss it with the deleting administrator. Because you included a link to an instagram account with the same usersname, I have to ask whether you are writing about yourself.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 05:18, 10 April 2018 (UTC)