User talk:Fallicarus

Good work on your grammatical edits, Fallicarus. In a couple of places, errors still remain (for instance, the misplaced modifier in your first corrected entry for Guys and Dolls, and the run-on early in the Phantom of the Opera entry).

Elliot Morley
Good work on the environmental section, though that section seems to be a bit scattered overall. The information you provide is useful, but there's very little of it. Are there any other sides to that debate? Mcwabaunsee 21:54, 15 November 2007 (UTC)

FedEx
"...allow access to international trade and tax cut debates as well as the rules..." It appears there's some necessary information omitted from the middle of this sentence.

"...sealed a deal..." Try for a more professional sounding verb. Mcwabaunsee 21:54, 15 November 2007 (UTC)

Political Donation Contributions
Your Teamsters section is the best of these three simply because it provides more information. Can you flesh out all of these sections a bit? What kind of interests they have?

Mcwabaunsee 21:54, 15 November 2007 (UTC)