User talk:Fallof00/Constitution of Kenya (1963)

Your draft looks really well put together so far! Considering the many parts of the constitution is often complicated and complex to explain, your page is easy to follow and the way you separated each section is clear. You also keep a neutral tone throughout the page. I also like how you utilized different ways to list out information like the table. It looks like you still are working on some sections so my only suggestions would be, first to add in citations to every sentence. Second, (it looks like you may be doing this already and just need to add it in) I think it would be interesting to add information on the public's opinion or responses to the establishment of the 1963 Constitution. I'm not sure if there were also certain sections of the constitution that were disputed or argued about so this might be an interesting addition if there is available info on it. ~ Lily

This looks very well written and organized. I would suggest expanding on the independence commissions. Perhaps elaborate on what each one accomplished. This could also be applied to the chapters of the constitution and their applications. Other than that and increasing the frequency of your citations, I think this is a very good start and a good expansion on the original article. -Frankie — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frankiesheehy (talk • contribs) 18:27, 13 November 2020 (UTC)