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April 2015
Hello, I'm Donner60. I noticed that you recently removed some content from Fatimah with this edit, without explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Donner60 (talk) 22:54, 29 April 2015 (UTC)

Fatimah
Your edit is adding non-neutral wording to the article. CambridgeBayWeather, Uqaqtuq (talk), Sunasuttuq 16:48, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

You put "her father (prophet Muhammad)" but as per Manual of Style/Islam-related articles in the section Muhammad is not neutral. It should just be "Muhammad". Then "the supporter and loving caretaker", that is not only not sourced but isn't neutral. Next, "Fatimah is a vital character in the religion of Islam and a role model for all women. Although there is controversy regarding different sects of Islam as to her political role; nonetheless, she is the daughter of the Prophet Muhammad and is loved by all." Again not sourced and not neutral. Lastly, "After her father passed away, she too joined him only 6 months later out of grief". Wikipedia does not use euphemisms, nor is it sourced as to her dying of grief. Muhammad died and Fatimah died six months later. CambridgeBayWeather, Uqaqtuq (talk), Sunasuttuq 20:33, 10 May 2015 (UTC)