User talk:Farel004/sandbox

Peer Review
I'm not sure if the very first paragraph is your lead section that states the most important information but in case it is, I believed you're giving too much emphasis on her artwork "Adansonia". Also remember to make separate headings for different sections like education and collections. Also remember to cite the articles you use. More in depth feedback: Who is Ibre Camargo, do we need to know about his influence or effect on Alvares? The Nervo Optico organized discussion about what exactly? What is UFRGS?

You need to fill in ALL the content under the subheadings. And you have no references or citations. This article will not be acceptable for publication on wikipedia.Nstrathman (talk) 06:17, 28 May 2019 (UTC)