User talk:Farley.ty/sandbox

-talk about the controversy of the loophole -i will take another look and try to add some more edits tonight other than that this looks amazing.

1. The article does many things well. First, there's a variety of topics covered concisely. You probably have plans on expanding each one, but so far the information has been to the point and relevant. One thing I would do is to make sure that each section is balanced, so you don't have one section that is much larger than the others. 2. If you have examples of the financial effects of Made in USA products it would enhance the background of these section. 3. Most important suggestion would be to make sure it flows and is balanced with the existing article. 4. One thing that I am going to take from this is how often and connected you made your links. I have not yet included my links, but I would like to be able to do so in a similar manner that you have done in this draft. Corbin Apple (talk) 15:50, 21 October 2016 (UTC)