User talk:Fatemeh Saber/sandbox

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Hi I have some feedback for you about the content in your sandbox.
 * Her father had married three times, two wives died. This is a comma splice, meaning that you have joined two complete sentences ("Her father had married three times" and "Two wives died") with only a comma. You either need a coordinating conjunction after the comma, this needs to become two sentences, or you need to use a semicolon instead of a comma.
 * The subjects of biographies are referred to exclusively by their surnames in Wikipedia. It was decided that calling someone by their first name sounded too "familiar" and did not lend itself to encyclopedic tone. Either call her "Hooker" or "Isabella Beecher Hooker" throughout, but never just "Isabella".
 * It is generally a red flag if a paragraph or a section ends without a citation. It means that information has been presented but no references are cited to say where that information came from
 * Then, at age fifteen, she returned to Connecticut for an additional year of schooling at the Hartford Female Seminary, the first school her sister Catherine had founded. Catherine was no longer involved with that school. needs a citation
 * Throughout the 1850s, Isabella supported the abolitionist cause, but her primary activity was motherhood. also needs a citation
 * The bill was rejected, but she reintroduced it every year until it passed in 1877. needs citation
 * Isabella's last appearance before the General Assembly to present the voting bill was in 1901. needs citation
 * Final two sentences uncited
 * Isabella soon started getting frustrated and reached out... started getting frustrated with what?
 * Newspapers are italicized (New York World, Chicago Tribune, The Hartford Courant)
 * Nineteenth Amendment is a proper noun and should be capitalized

Let me know if you have any questions about this feedback! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:59, 25 July 2019 (UTC)