User talk:Fatoomaq/sandbox

So far your contribution to your topic is good. Just check for grammar and the transition of your sentences, so the article flows a little better. It will probably be easier to move your article draft here to your sandbox so we can give more feedback through this talk page. But overall good contribution. Also show where you are adding your contribution to the original article DeeD13 (talk) 00:05, 18 October 2017 (UTC)