User talk:Fauci2.0/Familial exudative vitreoretinopathy

Good readability. Appropriate length of sentences. Readability score check was average. The article focused well on the topic and did not get off track. The lead section gives good overview and gives a clear introduction. It is organized well and broken down into subsections by themes. The flow is good and focuses on important aspects of the topic. The overall tone is neutral and without bias. It may be helpful to have pictures or diagrams, ex. for pathophysiology or diagnosis. Most parts of the article with proper citation, and the sources are all recent and independent. All sources are peer-reviewed journals and academic websites.2600:8802:6602:E100:A061:6EC3:CE02:805C (talk) 23:25, 3 January 2022 (UTC)